Jan. 1, 2021
The art of persuation
I have been studying for more than 25 years. People told me that an university degree was the path to success. Actually, all my generation grew believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our live, therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history. But it was an enormous lie.
All the things you will value more in your professional live aren't in an university syllabus. Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuation. I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuation frame. Is like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long. All the efforts I have done have no sense without mastering the art of persuation.
The aArt of pPersuatsion
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., are capitalized in the title.
I have been studying for more than 25 years.
"I have" is also written as "I've".
People told me that an university degree was the path to success.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment that we could make in order to improve our lives, therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history.
"We are" is most commonly written as "we're".
But it was an enormous lie.
All the things you will value more in your professional livfe aren't ion an university syllabus.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation, and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuatsion.
"Are not" is commonly written as "Aren't".
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and in all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuation framesive way.
I'm not sure what a "persuasion frame" is.
It's like if you are learning to swingm in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long.
A "swing" is a toy that kids have on playgrounds, where you use momentum in order to move yourself forward and backward.
"you are" is commonly written as "You're".
All the efforts I have donmade have no senpurpose without mastering the art of persuatsion.
"I have" is commonly written as "I've".
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
The art of persuatsion
I have been studying for more than 25 years.
People told me that an university degree was the path to success.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our live, tfe. Therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history.
But it was an enormous lie.
All the things you will value more in your professional livfe aren't in an university syllabus.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuatsion.
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuatsion frame.
It's like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long.
All the efforts I have done havmake no sense without mastering the art of persuatsion.
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For the most part, your grammar and spelling was good. However, your sentences are a bit too long in some parts. Long sentences disrupt the flow of a paragraph and generally English speakers prefer shorter sentences. Also, I wasn't quite sure what you were trying to say. Like what do you mean by the art of persuasion? Perhaps it would help if you explained it more or gave examples.
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