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April 4, 2022

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The Amusement Park

For the last thirty years of the last century, there was an amusement park in the Montjuïc mountain in Barcelona. Some times I had go with my mom when I was a child. I have good memories about it. This park had a lot of fun atractions, bars for lunch and a beautiful views over Barcelona. Was closed in 1998 because of low profitability. Another day, I will tell you about the amusement park of tibidabo.

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The Amusement Park

For the last thirty years of the last century, there was an amusement park inat the top of the Montjuïc mountain in Barcelona.

Some times I had gowent there with my mom when I was a child.

Or: Sometimes my mom took me there as a child.

I have good/fond memories aboutof it.

This park had a lot of fun attractions, bars for lunch and a beautiful views over Barcelona.

WIt was closed in 1998 because of low profitability.

Another Someday, I will tell you about the amusement park of tTibidabo.

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Ducky

April 5, 2022

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Thanks a lot for replies.

The Amusement Park


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For the last thirty years of the last century, there was an amusement park in the Montjuïc mountain in Barcelona.


For the last thirty years of the last century, there was an amusement park inat the top of the Montjuïc mountain in Barcelona.

Some times I had go with my mom when I was a child.


Some times I had gowent there with my mom when I was a child.

Or: Sometimes my mom took me there as a child.

I have good memories about it.


I have good/fond memories aboutof it.

This park had a lot of fun atractions, bars for lunch and a beautiful views over Barcelona.


This park had a lot of fun attractions, bars for lunch and a beautiful views over Barcelona.

Was closed in 1998 because of low profitability.


WIt was closed in 1998 because of low profitability.

Another day, I will tell you about the amusement park of tibidabo.


Another Someday, I will tell you about the amusement park of tTibidabo.

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