April 22, 2023
The advantages of working from home (essay)
The workplace has experienced a huge change enormously since the arrival of new technologies, specially concerning the tools and, more recently, motivated mainly during the Covid outbreak in 2020, due to a noticeable rise in online jobs.
In this sense, it is worth mentioning there are two important advantages which encourage potential workers to choose this path, that is, working at home and flexibility.
Accordingly to the first item, it implies not to travel to the place of work, which results in saving cost both for employee and company (as they do not have to pay maintenance costs like electricity). Of course, there could be many elements at home distracting our attention, particularly in case of having a baby. Nonetheless, setting a good place to work would allow us to be more focus on it, as well as, take much more advantages of our breaks.
Flexibility is usually the main claim that companies do in order to attract new staff. They often state that „you will be able to work whenever you want during the day“. Nevertheless, this apparently favorable situation might turn into more time at work for the same task, since the more one split the daily timetable the more time it will be necessary to complete such duty.
In conclusion, after considering both options, one could benefit much more from teleworking because of not having to travel to the office, that is to say, stay at home.
The following is the statement from Cambridge (it is supposed to be correct), so please do not correct it.
Your class has attended a lecture by a careers tutor about the advantages of
joining a company whose employees work online from home. You have made the notes below.
The advantages of working
from home:
+ no travelling
+ flexibility
+ comfort
Some opinions expressed after the
lecture:
"There are too many distractions.”
"I could work whatever part of the
day I wanted.”
“You would miss the company of
fellow workers.
Write an essay for your tutor discussing two of the advantages in your notes.
You should explain which advantage you think is more important, and provide
reasons to support your opinion
The workplace has experienced a huge change enormously since the arrival of new technologies, especially concerning the tools used in the workplace and, more recently, motivated mainly during the Covid outbreak in 2020, due to a noticeable rise in online jobsthe noticeable rise of online jobs due to the Covid outbreak in 2020.
"Enormously" is an adverb so it shouldn't modify "change" which is being used as a noun.
Also I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence, so this is my best guess
In this sense, it is worth mentioning that there are two important advantages which encourage potential workers to choose this path, that is, working at home and flexibility.
Accordingly to tThe first item, it implies not to traveling to the place of work, which results in saving costs for both forthe employee and the company (as they do not have to pay maintenance costs like electricity).
I think you meant to use "according to."
"According to" is used when you want to refer to what something or someone else said. Ex: "According to John, the game starts at 6."
Of course, there could be many elements at home distracverting our attention, particularly in the case of having a baby.
Divert - person's attention is directed from one thing to another. In this case, I imagine the person attention's would be diverted from their work to their baby.
Distract - preventing someone from giving their full attention to something, such as the baby distracting the person from working
Nonetheless, setthaving a good place to work would allow us to be more focused on it, as well as, take much more advantages of our breaks.
Flexibility is usually the main claimdraw that companies douse in order to attract new staff/employees. / Companies usually claim flexibility in order to attract new staff.
I'm using "the main draw" instead since it's more connected to the latter half of your sentence, "to attract new staff"
They often state that „you will be able to work whenever you want during the day“.
Nevertheless, this apparently favorable situation might turn into more time at work for the same task, since the more one splits the daily timetable, the more time it will be necessary to complete suchtheir duty / ...the more time it will take to complete their duty.
In conclusion, after considering both options, one could benefit much more from teleworking because of not having to travel to the office, that is to say, stay at home.
Not wrong, but I think it sounds better without the ending part.
May 2, 2023
Thank you so much for your corrections
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The advantages of working from home (essay) |
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The workplace has experienced a huge change enormously since the arrival of new technologies, specially concerning the tools and, more recently, motivated mainly during the Covid outbreak in 2020, due to a noticeable rise in online jobs. The workplace has experienced a huge change "Enormously" is an adverb so it shouldn't modify "change" which is being used as a noun. Also I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence, so this is my best guess |
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In this sense, it is worth mentioning there are two important advantages which encourage potential workers to choose this path, that is, working at home and flexibility. In this sense, it is worth mentioning that there are two important advantages which encourage potential workers to choose this path, that is, working at home and flexibility. |
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Accordingly to the first item, it implies not to travel to the place of work, which results in saving cost both for employee and company (as they do not have to pay maintenance costs like electricity).
I think you meant to use "according to." "According to" is used when you want to refer to what something or someone else said. Ex: "According to John, the game starts at 6." |
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Of course, there could be many elements at home distracting our attention, particularly in case of having a baby. Of course, there could be many elements at home di Divert - person's attention is directed from one thing to another. In this case, I imagine the person attention's would be diverted from their work to their baby. Distract - preventing someone from giving their full attention to something, such as the baby distracting the person from working |
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Nonetheless, setting a good place to work would allow us to be more focus on it, as well as, take much more advantages of our breaks. Nonetheless, |
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Flexibility is usually the main claim that companies do in order to attract new staff. Flexibility is usually the main I'm using "the main draw" instead since it's more connected to the latter half of your sentence, "to attract new staff" |
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They often state that „you will be able to work whenever you want during the day“. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nevertheless, this apparently favorable situation might turn into more time at work for the same task, since the more one split the daily timetable the more time it will be necessary to complete such duty. Nevertheless, this apparently favorable situation might turn into more time at work for the same task, since the more one splits the daily timetable, the more time |
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In conclusion, after considering both options, one could benefit much more from teleworking because of not having to travel to the office, that is to say, stay at home. In conclusion, after considering both options, one could benefit much more from teleworking because of not having to travel to the office Not wrong, but I think it sounds better without the ending part. |
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