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The advantages and disadvantages of studying online

In for few years studying online became very popular type of studying in all education institution. But what is advantages of that. The first, it is very comfortable, you can study with cup of cofee or tea, or just step back for few seconds with out questions of teacher. Also, when you stay in home, you never forget anything. And the most plus of that type of studying it is mainly cheaper. But what is disadvatages of this? Main thing is lack of communication with people. And it is true, definitely for all online studying you can't see nobody. But after that, problems do not end. Very often during studying i had a lot issues with my laptop or internet connection, and mainly it was not my guilt. As a conclusion, stuying online has got a lot of advantages, but absense of communication does for me ofline studying for me absolutely better.

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The advantages and disadvantages of studying online

In forthe last few years, studying online has becaome a very popular typmode of studying in all educational institutions.

(1) I'd suggest the addition of a comma.
(2) mode: a way or manner in which something occurs or is experienced, expressed, or done.
(3) "Educational institution" is the proper phrase.
(4) "Educational instutition" should be plural, since the set of all education institutions contains more than one institution.

But what isare the advantages of that.is?

(1) It should be "are" and not "is", since "advantages" is plural.
(2) In the subsequent sentences, you use "this" instead of "that", so for consistency's sake, you can consider using "this" here.

The fFirst, it is very comfortable,: you can study with a cup of coffee or tea, or just step back for a few seconds with out questions ofa teacher.

I'm not certain what is mean by "step back for a few seconds without questions of teacher", so I took my best guess at it. Maybe you can provide me with the native text.

Also, when you stay inat home, you never forget anything.

Alternatively: "when you stay in your home". However, "when you stay at home" is more concise and probably more natural.

And the most plus of that typbiggest positive of this mode of studying it is mainly that it is cheaper.

(1) positive: a desirable or constructive quality or attribute. Alternatively: "the biggest advantage".
(2) "This" might sound more natural than "that".

But what isare the disadvatages of this?

MThe main thing is (the) lack of communication with people.

And it is true, definitely true, for all online studying, that you can't see noanybody.

(1) "Definitely" should be placed before "true". The way you wrote it has a different implication, though it is subtle. I shall not explain it for now, as it might be a little hard to grasp.
(2) "you can't see nobody" is actually correct, but it's slang. When writing in standard English, we'd use "anybody".

But after that,the problems do not end (there).

Very often during, when studying i, I had a lot issues with my laptop or internet connection, and mainostly it was not my guifault.

(1) You can consider commas here.
(2) "During" is used with nouns, so alternatively, you could write: "Very often, during study".
(3) "I" is always capitalised.
(4) "Mostly" is more natural than "mainly" in this context.
(5) fault: responsibility for an accident or misfortune.

As aIn conclusion, studying online has got a lot of advantages, but the absensce of communication does for me omakes offline studying for me absolutely better.

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Overall, I noticed a lack of determiners (words like "the", "a", etc.) in your writing. You should them more, in phrases such as "A very popular mode of studying", "THE advantages of this", "A cup of coffee", "THE disadvantages of this", etc.

The advantages and disadvantages of studying online


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In for few years studying online became very popular type of studying in all education institution.


In forthe last few years, studying online has becaome a very popular typmode of studying in all educational institutions.

(1) I'd suggest the addition of a comma. (2) mode: a way or manner in which something occurs or is experienced, expressed, or done. (3) "Educational institution" is the proper phrase. (4) "Educational instutition" should be plural, since the set of all education institutions contains more than one institution.

But what is advantages of that.


But what isare the advantages of that.is?

(1) It should be "are" and not "is", since "advantages" is plural. (2) In the subsequent sentences, you use "this" instead of "that", so for consistency's sake, you can consider using "this" here.

The first, it is very comfortable, you can study with cup of cofee or tea, or just step back for few seconds with out questions of teacher.


The fFirst, it is very comfortable,: you can study with a cup of coffee or tea, or just step back for a few seconds with out questions ofa teacher.

I'm not certain what is mean by "step back for a few seconds without questions of teacher", so I took my best guess at it. Maybe you can provide me with the native text.

Also, when you stay in home, you never forget anything.


Also, when you stay inat home, you never forget anything.

Alternatively: "when you stay in your home". However, "when you stay at home" is more concise and probably more natural.

And the most plus of that type of studying it is mainly cheaper.


And the most plus of that typbiggest positive of this mode of studying it is mainly that it is cheaper.

(1) positive: a desirable or constructive quality or attribute. Alternatively: "the biggest advantage". (2) "This" might sound more natural than "that".

But what is disadvatages of this?


But what isare the disadvatages of this?

Main thing is lack of communication with people.


MThe main thing is (the) lack of communication with people.

And it is true, definitely for all online studying you can't see nobody.


And it is true, definitely true, for all online studying, that you can't see noanybody.

(1) "Definitely" should be placed before "true". The way you wrote it has a different implication, though it is subtle. I shall not explain it for now, as it might be a little hard to grasp. (2) "you can't see nobody" is actually correct, but it's slang. When writing in standard English, we'd use "anybody".

But after that, problems do not end.


But after that,the problems do not end (there).

Very often during studying i had a lot issues with my laptop or internet connection, and mainly it was not my guilt.


Very often during, when studying i, I had a lot issues with my laptop or internet connection, and mainostly it was not my guifault.

(1) You can consider commas here. (2) "During" is used with nouns, so alternatively, you could write: "Very often, during study". (3) "I" is always capitalised. (4) "Mostly" is more natural than "mainly" in this context. (5) fault: responsibility for an accident or misfortune.

As a conclusion, stuying online has got a lot of advantages, but absense of communication does for me ofline studying for me absolutely better.


As aIn conclusion, studying online has got a lot of advantages, but the absensce of communication does for me omakes offline studying for me absolutely better.

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