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sergio

April 6, 2023

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The advantages and disadvantages of buying brand names

Many people of all ages are interested in buying brand name products currently, specifically clothing. Despite their gigantic price difference with others, not everyone view this as an issue.

On the one hand, there are customers who cannot afford them. They don't have enough money and also think that there is no need to spend so much money on a single product, just because it is a branded clothing. This type of customers don't see clothing as a sign identity, but they buy clothes whenever they need them. For this reason, they rarely follow any fashion. They are more interested in the price, the quality and the utility of them. For example, when winter is coming, the first thing that these families think isn't what is the fashion of the moment, but what material the clothes are made of and whether they are suitable for the cold.

On the other hand, following a trend or fashion can be fun. Those in favour of buying brand name products, view this as a hobby. It is true that they are more expensive; however, they are normally made of with better quality materials. For this reason they are going to have a longer lifetime.

In conclusion, it's a fact that people are buying branded products more than ever and that it can make life more fun for some people, but i am not in favour of this. I strongly believe that people don't buy brand name products for their quality, but they view them as a kind of sign of status.

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Many pPeople of all ages are interested in buying brand name products currently, specifically clothing.

Despite their gigantic price difference with others, not everyone views this as an issue.

They don't have enough money and also think that there is no need to spend aso much money on a single product, just because it is a branded clothing.

This type of customers doesn't see clothing as a sign identity, but they buyonly buy new clothes whenever they need them.

For this reason, they rarely follow any fashion trends.

They are more interested in the price, the quality and the utility of them clothes.

For example, when winter is coming, the first thing that these families think isn't "what is the fashion of the moment?", but what material the clothes are made of, and whether they are suitable for the cold.

Those in favour of buying brand name products, view ithis as a hobby.

It is true that they are more expensive; however, they are normally made of with better quality materials.

"with better quality materials" also works :)

For this reason, they are going to have a longer lifetimewill last longer.

In conclusion, it's a fact that people are buying branded products more than ever, and that it can make life more fun for some people, but iI am not in favour of this.

I strongly believe that people don't buy brand name products for their quality, but they view them as a kind of sign of statustatus symbol.

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Great job! Your thoughts were logically explained :)

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sergio

April 8, 2023

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Thank you so much!

The advantages and disadvantages of buying brand name products

Many people of all ages are interested in buying brand name products currentlythese days, specifically clothing.

I feel like this is more in line with what you meant.

Despite their gigantic price difference with otherbetween them and other products, not everyone views this as an issue.

"Others" is most often used to refer to people, and "X's difference with Y" sounds somewhat strange. It should be "the difference between X and Y."
Every"one" is singular (just like no one, someone, anyone, etc.).

On the one hand, there are customers who cannot afford them.

They don't have enough money and also think that there is no need to spend so much money on a single product, just because it is a branded piece of clothing.

You cannot say "a clothing." You must say "a piece of/an article of clothing" instead. (Same goes for "clothings" vs. "pieces/articles of clothing")

This type of customers don't see clothing as a n expressigon of their identity, butand they buy clothes wheneveras they need them.

"Sign identity"? I wasn't sure what you meant, so I took a bit of a guess.
If you say "but," it sounds to me like you're saying something that contradicts the "don't see clothing as...." In actuality, you're giving additional info along the same vein, so I think and is more suitable here.

For this reason, they rarely follow any fashion trends.

They are more interested in the price, the quality, and the utility of them.

Oxford comma

For example, when winter is coming, the first thing that these families think isn't what is the fashion oftrend is at the moment, but what material the clothes are made of and whether they are suitable for the cold.

On the other hand, following a trend or fashion can be fun.

Those in favour of buying brand name products, view this as a hobby.

It is true that they are more expensive; however, they are normally made of with better quality materials.

Made of is fine and made with is also fine, but made of with is not.

For this reason, they are going to have a longer lifetime.

Comma after introductory phrase

In conclusion, it's a facttrue that people are buying branded products more than ever and that ithis can make life more fun for some people, but iI am not in favour of this.

I strongly believe that people don't buy brand name products for their quality, but theyinstead view them as a kind of sign of status.

Again, I don't know if it's just me, but if you say "but they" here, it gives me the wrong idea about what "but" is trying to contradict.
I could have used ", and they view" here too like I did above, but this sounds nicer to me here. You could also have used "but instead" in the sentence above for the same effect.

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Nice work! And I agree. Brand-name clothes are not that much higher-quality than regular clothes, and there are many options that are both more affordable and higher-quality than the most popular fashion brands.

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sergio

April 6, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections :DD. Yes, I should put "but instead" instead of just "but".

The advantages and disadvantages of buying brand names


The advantages and disadvantages of buying brand name products

Many people of all ages are interested in buying brand name products currently, specifically clothing.


Many people of all ages are interested in buying brand name products currentlythese days, specifically clothing.

I feel like this is more in line with what you meant.

Many pPeople of all ages are interested in buying brand name products currently, specifically clothing.

Despite their gigantic price difference with others, not everyone view this as an issue.


Despite their gigantic price difference with otherbetween them and other products, not everyone views this as an issue.

"Others" is most often used to refer to people, and "X's difference with Y" sounds somewhat strange. It should be "the difference between X and Y." Every"one" is singular (just like no one, someone, anyone, etc.).

Despite their gigantic price difference with others, not everyone views this as an issue.

On the one hand, there are customers who cannot afford them.


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They don't have enough money and also think that there is no need to spend so much money on a single product, just because it is a branded clothing.


They don't have enough money and also think that there is no need to spend so much money on a single product, just because it is a branded piece of clothing.

You cannot say "a clothing." You must say "a piece of/an article of clothing" instead. (Same goes for "clothings" vs. "pieces/articles of clothing")

They don't have enough money and also think that there is no need to spend aso much money on a single product, just because it is a branded clothing.

This type of customers don't see clothing as a sign identity, but they buy clothes whenever they need them.


This type of customers don't see clothing as a n expressigon of their identity, butand they buy clothes wheneveras they need them.

"Sign identity"? I wasn't sure what you meant, so I took a bit of a guess. If you say "but," it sounds to me like you're saying something that contradicts the "don't see clothing as...." In actuality, you're giving additional info along the same vein, so I think and is more suitable here.

This type of customers doesn't see clothing as a sign identity, but they buyonly buy new clothes whenever they need them.

For this reason, they rarely follow any fashion.


For this reason, they rarely follow any fashion trends.

For this reason, they rarely follow any fashion trends.

They are more interested in the price, the quality and the utility of them.


They are more interested in the price, the quality, and the utility of them.

Oxford comma

They are more interested in the price, the quality and the utility of them clothes.

For example, when winter is coming, the first thing that these families think isn't what is the fashion of the moment, but what material the clothes are made of and whether they are suitable for the cold.


For example, when winter is coming, the first thing that these families think isn't what is the fashion oftrend is at the moment, but what material the clothes are made of and whether they are suitable for the cold.

For example, when winter is coming, the first thing that these families think isn't "what is the fashion of the moment?", but what material the clothes are made of, and whether they are suitable for the cold.

On the other hand, following a trend or fashion can be fun.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Those in favour of buying brand name products, view this as a hobby.


Those in favour of buying brand name products, view this as a hobby.

Those in favour of buying brand name products, view ithis as a hobby.

It is true that they are more expensive; however, they are normally made of with better quality materials.


It is true that they are more expensive; however, they are normally made of with better quality materials.

Made of is fine and made with is also fine, but made of with is not.

It is true that they are more expensive; however, they are normally made of with better quality materials.

"with better quality materials" also works :)

For this reason they are going to have a longer lifetime.


For this reason, they are going to have a longer lifetime.

Comma after introductory phrase

For this reason, they are going to have a longer lifetimewill last longer.

In conclusion, it's a fact that people are buying branded products more than ever and that it can make life more fun for some people, but i am not in favour of this.


In conclusion, it's a facttrue that people are buying branded products more than ever and that ithis can make life more fun for some people, but iI am not in favour of this.

In conclusion, it's a fact that people are buying branded products more than ever, and that it can make life more fun for some people, but iI am not in favour of this.

I strongly believe that people don't buy brand name products for their quality, but they view them as a kind of sign of status.


I strongly believe that people don't buy brand name products for their quality, but theyinstead view them as a kind of sign of status.

Again, I don't know if it's just me, but if you say "but they" here, it gives me the wrong idea about what "but" is trying to contradict. I could have used ", and they view" here too like I did above, but this sounds nicer to me here. You could also have used "but instead" in the sentence above for the same effect.

I strongly believe that people don't buy brand name products for their quality, but they view them as a kind of sign of statustatus symbol.

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