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Forestell

April 5, 2025

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The 5th of April

Today is Saturday. Now, I'm listening to music. The song is called 'Fall in love and cry' by Frick Party. I like listening to music. It makes me happier. I'm going to play CS2 in a few minutes. Thank you very much


Сегодня суббота. Сейчас я слушаю музыку. Песня называется "Влюбиться и плакать" от Фрик пати. Мне нравится слушать музыку. Это делает меня счастливее. Я собираюсь поиграть в кс2 через пару минут. Спасибо большое

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NRight now, I'm listening to music.

You could also say "Currently, I'm listening to music."

The song is called '"Fall in love and cry'" by Frick Party.

Thank you very much.

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Well done!

Today is Saturday.

Now,MY PREFERENCE: Now(,) I'm listening to some music.

Note #1: The comma is optional here - you can delete it.
Note #2: The phrase "some music" seems more natural than "music" to me.

The song is called 'Fall in love and cry' by Frick Party.

I like listening to music.

It makes me happier.

The 5th of April

Today is Saturday.

Now, I'm listening to music.

The song is called 'Fall in love and cry' by Frick Party.

I like listening to music.

It makes me happier.

I'm going to play CS2 in a few minutes.

Thank you very much

Feedback

very good!

The 5th of April

Today is Saturday.

NRight now, I'm listening to music.

This sounds more natural, but what you wrote is still correct.

The song is called 'Fall in lLove and cCry' by Frick Party.

I couldn't find this song or band, but song titles are usually capitalized in English.

I like listening to music.

It makes me happier.

I'm going to play CS2 in a few minutes.

Thank you very muchs for reading.

In this case, it would sound better if you thanked someone for something (reading, correcting, etc.).

Feedback

Very good! There were no real mistakes, I just gave some suggestions. =)

Some of the sentences were very short, so you could also consider combining some of them to make longer sentences. This would make it sound more natural.

The 5th of April


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Today is Saturday.


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Now, I'm listening to music.


NRight now, I'm listening to music.

This sounds more natural, but what you wrote is still correct.

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Now,MY PREFERENCE: Now(,) I'm listening to some music.

Note #1: The comma is optional here - you can delete it. Note #2: The phrase "some music" seems more natural than "music" to me.

NRight now, I'm listening to music.

You could also say "Currently, I'm listening to music."

The song is called 'Fall in love and cry' by Frick Party.


The song is called 'Fall in lLove and cCry' by Frick Party.

I couldn't find this song or band, but song titles are usually capitalized in English.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The song is called '"Fall in love and cry'" by Frick Party.

I like listening to music.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It makes me happier.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to play CS2 in a few minutes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you very much


Thank you very muchs for reading.

In this case, it would sound better if you thanked someone for something (reading, correcting, etc.).

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you very much.

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