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The 3 questions that change your life



This 3 questions is only for mature or even people after 50’s.

Younger person will understand those questions.

But don’t have that rich “life experience” to answer such questions.

1 where I come from?

2 where will I go?

3 what have I done.

For me, first time I hear this questions.

Here is my answers:
1 come from my mother’s belly

2 I will go to either heaven or hell.

3 I enjoy life that is what I do

Maybe you will have different answers.

The third question makes me think a lot.

Makes me remember this Ted talks.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uebxlIrosiM&t=303s

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The 3 questions that change your life

*Thisese* 3 questions is*are* only for mature or even people after 50’s*people* or even *those* *in their* 50’s *or older*.

"Questions" is a plural word and so "are" must be the verb. Use "people" because you are referring to more than one person.

Younger *personople* will understand those questions.

Again, use "people" to refer to more than one person.

But *they* don’t have that rich “life experience” to answer such questions.

This is not a complete sentence. You need a subject .

1 where *do* I come from?

A verb is missing in this question.

2 where will I go?

3 what have I done.

For me, *the* first time I hear *thisese* questions.

A definite article ("the") is needed. Also, "questions" is plural, therefore "these" is correct.

Here is*are* my answers:

Because "answers" is plural the correct word is "are".

1 *I* come from my mother’s belly

You are missing the subject in this sentence ("I").

2 I will go to either heaven or hell.

3 I enjoy life";" that is what I do

A semicolon (";") connects two complete sentances.

Maybe you will have different answers.

The third question makes me think a lot.

M*This* makes me remember this Ted ED *talks*.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uebxlIrosiM&t=303s

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Your English is quite good. Just remember that every sentece needs a subject and a verb. Also remember to match plural subjects with plural verbs. I enjoyed your story!

The 3 questions that change your life

This 3ese three questions isare only for mature or even people aftepeople or those who are least in their 50’s.

Younger personople will understand thoese questions.

But, they don’t have thate rich “life experience” to answer such questionsnecessary to answer them.

1 w. Where did I come from?

2 w. Where will I go?

3 w. What have I done.?

Here isare my answers from the first time I heard these questions:

Combine with the last sentence, which doesn't make sense on its own.

1. I coame from my mother’s belly.

2. I will go to either heaven or hell.

3. I enjoy life; that is what I do.

Maybe you will have different answers.

The third question makes me think a lot.

MIt makes me remember this TedED talks.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uebxlIrosiM&t=303s

The 3 questions that change your life


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This 3 questions is only for mature or even people after 50’s.


This 3ese three questions isare only for mature or even people aftepeople or those who are least in their 50’s.

*Thisese* 3 questions is*are* only for mature or even people after 50’s*people* or even *those* *in their* 50’s *or older*.

"Questions" is a plural word and so "are" must be the verb. Use "people" because you are referring to more than one person.

Younger person will understand those questions.


Younger personople will understand thoese questions.

Younger *personople* will understand those questions.

Again, use "people" to refer to more than one person.

But don’t have that rich “life experience” to answer such questions.


But, they don’t have thate rich “life experience” to answer such questionsnecessary to answer them.

But *they* don’t have that rich “life experience” to answer such questions.

This is not a complete sentence. You need a subject .

1 where I come from?


1 w. Where did I come from?

1 where *do* I come from?

A verb is missing in this question.

2 where will I go?


2 w. Where will I go?

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3 what have I done.


3 w. What have I done.?

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For me, first time I hear this questions.


For me, *the* first time I hear *thisese* questions.

A definite article ("the") is needed. Also, "questions" is plural, therefore "these" is correct.

Here is my answers:


Here isare my answers from the first time I heard these questions:

Combine with the last sentence, which doesn't make sense on its own.

Here is*are* my answers:

Because "answers" is plural the correct word is "are".

1 come from my mother’s belly


1. I coame from my mother’s belly.

1 *I* come from my mother’s belly

You are missing the subject in this sentence ("I").

2 I will go to either heaven or hell.


2. I will go to either heaven or hell.

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3 I enjoy life that is what I do


3. I enjoy life; that is what I do.

3 I enjoy life";" that is what I do

A semicolon (";") connects two complete sentances.

Maybe you will have different answers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The third question makes me think a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Makes me remember this Ted talks.


MIt makes me remember this TedED talks.

M*This* makes me remember this Ted ED *talks*.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uebxlIrosiM&t=303s


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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