Dec. 20, 2020
That's intersting!
I would try to describe how it feels, for example: Red it's the same color of our blood, and
when you look at you get the feeling of passion or rage.
That's interesting!
Spelling error.
I wouldill try to describe how it feels, for example: "Red, it's the same color of our blood, and
"it's the color of our blood" or "it's the same color **as our** blood"
when you look at it you get the feeling offeel passion orand rage."
There needs to be an object after "look at", and "get the feeling of" is better as "feel" (more succinct, and more direct).
I wouldill try to describe how it feels, for example:, Red i. It's the same color of our blood, and
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That's intersting! That's interesting! Spelling error. |
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I would try to describe how it feels, for example: Red it's the same color of our blood, and I w I w "it's the color of our blood" or "it's the same color **as our** blood" |
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when you look at you get the feeling of passion or rage. when you look at it you There needs to be an object after "look at", and "get the feeling of" is better as "feel" (more succinct, and more direct). |
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