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July 15, 2025

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That’s all, folks!

hello again, it's me Berg, Eu sumi por mais ou menos 6 months, many time all right, as usual I 'm very happy today because I return my english study, I’m going to talk a little about my day-to-day. ok lets go first, I started my day early aroud 06 am, because my wife going to work early, then I prepered some activites during this morning, for extense, prepered my breakfast and I go back to my bed to sleep a little longer. That’s why my day starts so nicely. Lettle I go to work, I’m not going to talk about my day at work, because it’s so boring. now I am at house, wow, the day is very extressfull, very full and crazy but I am here very good, my energy is full now. then was it, I finished my personal diary for today.That’s all, folks!


Olá de novo, sou eu Berg, Eu sumi por mais ou menos 6 meses, muito tempo tudo bem, como de costume, estou muito feliz hoje porque retornei aos meus estudos de inglês, vou falar um pouco sobre o meu dia a dia. Ok, vamos primeiro, comecei meu dia cedo por volta das 6 da manhã, porque minha esposa vai trabalhar cedo, então preparei algumas atividades durante esta manhã, por exemplo, preparei meu café da manhã e voltei para minha cama para dormir um pouco mais. É por isso que meu dia começa tão bem. Depois vou trabalhar, não vou falar sobre o meu dia no trabalho, porque é muito chato. Agora estou em casa, nossa, o dia está muito estressante, muito cheio e louco, mas estou aqui muito bem, minha energia está cheia agora. Então foi isso, terminei meu diário pessoal de hoje. Isso é tudo, pessoal!

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That’s aAll, fFolks!

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hHello again, i. It's me, Berg, Eu sumi por mais ou menos 6 months, many. I disappeared for about 6 months - a long time, all right, a. As usual, I 'm very happy today because I'm returning my eEnglish study, . I’m going to talk a little about my day-to-day (life).

English is always capitalized

okOk, let's go first,(start off / begin). I started my day early at around 06 am, because my wife was going to work early, t. Then I prepered some activites durdid a few things this morning, for extense,instance, I prepeared my breakfast and I go. Then I went back to my bed to sleep a little longer.

"Go first" is more used when you have multiple people who will take turns doing something. For example, "Let's all introduce ourselves. Marie, you go first."

That’s why my day startsed so nicely.

The above means for TODAY. An alternative to mean that every day starts nicely: That's why my days start so nicely.

Lettle I goater, I went to work,. I’m not going to talk about my day at work, because it’s so boring.

nNow I am at house, wme. Wow, the day iwas very exstressfull, very full and crazy but I am here. But now I am feeling very good, and my energy is full now.

then waThat's it, I finished my personal diary/journal entry for today. That’s all, folks!

A diary or journal refers to the whole book (or the whole collection of diary/journal entries if it is all electronic). Each time you write and submit, it is an "entry."

Small subtlety but a "diary" is typically to be something very private that you do not want to share. "Journal" is a bit more neutral in this sense.

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That’s all, folks!


That’s aAll, fFolks!

Title capitalization rules

That’s why my day starts so nicely.


That’s why my day startsed so nicely.

The above means for TODAY. An alternative to mean that every day starts nicely: That's why my days start so nicely.

hello again, it's me Berg, Eu sumi por mais ou menos 6 months, many time all right, as usual I 'm very happy today because I return my english study, I’m going to talk a little about my day-to-day.


hHello again, i. It's me, Berg, Eu sumi por mais ou menos 6 months, many. I disappeared for about 6 months - a long time, all right, a. As usual, I 'm very happy today because I'm returning my eEnglish study, . I’m going to talk a little about my day-to-day (life).

English is always capitalized

ok lets go first, I started my day early aroud 06 am, because my wife going to work early, then I prepered some activites during this morning, for extense, prepered my breakfast and I go back to my bed to sleep a little longer.


okOk, let's go first,(start off / begin). I started my day early at around 06 am, because my wife was going to work early, t. Then I prepered some activites durdid a few things this morning, for extense,instance, I prepeared my breakfast and I go. Then I went back to my bed to sleep a little longer.

"Go first" is more used when you have multiple people who will take turns doing something. For example, "Let's all introduce ourselves. Marie, you go first."

Lettle I go to work, I’m not going to talk about my day at work, because it’s so boring.


Lettle I goater, I went to work,. I’m not going to talk about my day at work, because it’s so boring.

now I am at house, wow, the day is very extressfull, very full and crazy but I am here very good, my energy is full now.


nNow I am at house, wme. Wow, the day iwas very exstressfull, very full and crazy but I am here. But now I am feeling very good, and my energy is full now.

then was it, I finished my personal diary for today.That’s all, folks!


then waThat's it, I finished my personal diary/journal entry for today. That’s all, folks!

A diary or journal refers to the whole book (or the whole collection of diary/journal entries if it is all electronic). Each time you write and submit, it is an "entry." Small subtlety but a "diary" is typically to be something very private that you do not want to share. "Journal" is a bit more neutral in this sense.

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