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Tammy

yesterday

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I mentioned that I had minored in Chinese Language and Literature during my university years.

It came from a very great system created by an old president of our university. Starting from the second year of their studies, every undergraduate student is allowed to choose to study one or more additional majors. Then, if they have enough college credits in the major, they can have a second diploma, or more.

I've personally benefited greatly from this system. Besides the diploma, I possess an efficient learning ability under pressure, which I've utilized multiple times throughout my career. And more importantly, it was almost free--that's very crucial for the young me. I covered most of my university expenses through government loans, scholarships, and part-time jobs. If this system needed money, even if it was cheap, I might have to give up.

Yesterday, the old president who offered this system passed away, at his 92.

Thanks a lot to this president!

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Then, if they have enough college credits in their major, they can havpursue a second diploma, or more.

And more importantly, it was almost free-- - that' was very crucial for themy young meer self.

"that's" only abbreviates "that is", not "that was"

If this system needed money, even if it was cheap, I might have had to give up.

Yesterday, the old president who offered this system passed away, at his 92.

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Tammy

today

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

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I mentioned that I had minored in Chinese Language and Literature during my university years.

It came from a very great system created by an old former president of our university.

I've personally benefited greatly from this system.

Besides the diploma, I possess an efficient learning ability under pressure, which I've utilized multiple times throughout my career.

And more importantly, it was almost free--that' which was very crucial for the young meme back then.

If this system needed money, even if it was cheap, I mightwould have to given up.

Yesterday, the old president who offercreated this system passed away, at hisage 92.

Thanks a lot to this president!

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He sounds like a kind person. May he rest in peace 🙏🏾.

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Toluwani

yesterday

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The president of a university can also be called a chancellor, but in my country, university heads are called vice chancellor, while the chancellor is the ceremonial head (King).

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

today

2

Thank you!

Indeed, he was kind and smart.

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I mentioned that I had minored in Chinese Language and Literature during my university years.


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It came from a very great system created by an old president of our university.


It came from a very great system created by an old former president of our university.

Starting from the second year of their studies, every undergraduate student is allowed to choose to study one or more additional majors.


Then, if they have enough college credits in the major, they can have a second diploma, or more.


Then, if they have enough college credits in their major, they can havpursue a second diploma, or more.

I've personally benefited greatly from this system.


I've personally benefited greatly from this system.

Besides the diploma, I possess an efficient learning ability under pressure, which I've utilized multiple times throughout my career.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And more importantly, it was almost free--that's very crucial for the young me.


And more importantly, it was almost free--that' which was very crucial for the young meme back then.

And more importantly, it was almost free-- - that' was very crucial for themy young meer self.

"that's" only abbreviates "that is", not "that was"

I covered most of my university expenses through government loans, scholarships, and part-time jobs.


If this system needed money, even if it was cheap, I might have to give up.


If this system needed money, even if it was cheap, I mightwould have to given up.

If this system needed money, even if it was cheap, I might have had to give up.

Yesterday, the old president who offered this system passed away, at his 92.


Yesterday, the old president who offercreated this system passed away, at hisage 92.

Yesterday, the old president who offered this system passed away, at his 92.

Thanks a lot to this president!


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