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June 27, 2025

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Today i want say about my girlfriend.Okay my girlfriend is 16 years old her name is Sofia but i usually named her Sonya in my language is means sleepy
She is not tall her height is 155 cm her weight is so little bettwen her and mine.I love her so much because she make me happy every deay in a week and of the month and every year. I like her hair her smile i love her face i love her so much this girl is pretty is ideal for me.I like go with her in the park or square or somewhere i dont mind where i am my head is lost my mind when i with her

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A text about my girlfriend

Today i want saytalk about my girlfriend. Okay, my girlfriend is 16 years old her name is Sofia but i usually namedcall her Sonya i. In my language ist means sleepy’.
She is not tall her height is 155 cm
and her weight is so little bettween hers and mine.I love her so much because she makes me happy every deay in a week and of the week, month and every year.

I like her hair and her smile. i love her face, i love her so much this girl is pretty is ideal for me.I like to go with her into the park or square or someanywhere i dont mind where i am . my head is lost my mindall over the place when i’m with her

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text about my girlfriend

Today iI want sayto talk about my girlfriend. Okay, my girlfriend is 16 years old, her name is Sofia but iI usually namedcall her Sonya in my language iswhich means sleepy .
She is not tall
(sher height is 155 cm tall) and sher weight is so little bettwen her and mincompared to me. I love her so much because she makes me happy every deay in a week and of theof every week of every month andof every year.

I like her hair her smile i love her face i love her so much this girl is pretty is ideal for me.I like go with her in the park or square or somewhere i dont mind where i am my head is lost my mind when i with her

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0urMutualFriend

June 28, 2025

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Sorry, I hadn't corrected the second part of your text!

I like her hair and her smile; I love her face; I love her so much. This girl is pretty ideal for me. I like to go with her to the park or square, anywhere. I don't mind where I am, my head is in the clouds when I'm with her.

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I like her hair her smile i love her face i love her so much this girl is pretty is ideal for me.I like go with her in the park or square or somewhere i dont mind where i am my head is lost my mind when i with her


I like her hair her smile i love her face i love her so much this girl is pretty is ideal for me.I like go with her in the park or square or somewhere i dont mind where i am my head is lost my mind when i with her

I like her hair and her smile. i love her face, i love her so much this girl is pretty is ideal for me.I like to go with her into the park or square or someanywhere i dont mind where i am . my head is lost my mindall over the place when i’m with her

Today i want say about my girlfriend.Okay my girlfriend is 16 years old her name is Sofia but i usually named her Sonya in my language is means sleepy She is not tall her height is 155 cm her weight is so little bettwen her and mine.I love her so much because she make me happy every deay in a week and of the month and every year.


Today iI want sayto talk about my girlfriend. Okay, my girlfriend is 16 years old, her name is Sofia but iI usually namedcall her Sonya in my language iswhich means sleepy .
She is not tall
(sher height is 155 cm tall) and sher weight is so little bettwen her and mincompared to me. I love her so much because she makes me happy every deay in a week and of theof every week of every month andof every year.

Today i want saytalk about my girlfriend. Okay, my girlfriend is 16 years old her name is Sofia but i usually namedcall her Sonya i. In my language ist means sleepy’.
She is not tall her height is 155 cm
and her weight is so little bettween hers and mine.I love her so much because she makes me happy every deay in a week and of the week, month and every year.

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