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camila5fea

Feb. 1, 2023

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Hello it’s saturday I'm sleeping much so I feel tired. I tried to study but I can not because I tired and I don’t have a concentration. Today I should to read one chapter of the book Robin Wood I think that I’ll to read later before to read this text.
In last week I studied English, I saw the grammar of the possessive pronom and the “must”. I don’t like the teacher because he have may politics problems but Keny’s course is very good. I hope to learn grammar with him but the accent I’ll learn the british accent. I like british literature and I hope to read many books in your original language.
I have read it with Oscar Wilde’s books, The Picture of Dorian Gray. In the season I was very young and I think that I don’t understood all aspects of the book. I should to read again.
Yesterday I began to read L’étranger one book in French language for to practice my reading . I don’t like more French ou Korean language. I don’t way… Might I could search things in this languages for to like again.
One last thing: I don’t began to read Charlotte’s Web.

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Text 2 - eEnglish

We always capitalize languages, countries and nationalities.

Hello, it’s sSaturday and I'm sleeping so much sothat I feel tired.

I tried to study but I can not because I am tired and I don’t have acan't concentratione.

Today I should to read one chapter of the book _Robin Wood_ but I think that I’ll to read it later before to read this textafter I write this journal entry.

In lLast week when I studied English, I sawread about the grammar of the possessive pronomun and the “must.

I don’t like the teacher because he haves many politicsal problems but Keny’s course is very good.

I hope to learn grammar with him but the accent I'll learn will be the bBritish accent.

I like bBritish literature andso I hope to read many books in yourthe original language.

I have read it with Oscar Wilde’s books, _The Picture of Dorian Gray_.

We underline titles of books.

In the seasonWhen I read it I was very young and Iso I do not think that I don’t understood all the aspects of the book so I should read it again.

I should to read again.

Yesterday I began to read a L’étranger one book in French language for to practice my reading .

I don’t like more French oumore than the Korean language.

I'm not sure what you're saying so this is my best guess. Also, this sentence sounds kind of non sequitur as you haven't mentioned studying the Korean language before.

I don’t way… Might I couldknow why. Maybe I can search for things in thisese languages for me to like them again.

One last thing: I don’haven't begaun to read _Charlotte’s Web_.

I don't see how this thought fits with the rest of what you've written.

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Good work.

Hello it’s sSaturday I'mand i didn’t sleeping much so I feel tired.

Very good!

I tried to study but I can not because I am tired and I don’t have athe concentration.

Today I should towill read one chapter of the book Robin Wood. I think that I’ll to read later, before toi read this text.

In lLast week I studied English, I saw the grammar of the possessive pronom and theun “must”.

Very good! Just work on grammar and spelling!

I don’t like the teacher because he haves many politicsal problems but Keny’sthe course is very good.

I hope to learn grammar with him but the accent I’ll learn is the british accent.

I like bBritish literature and I hope to read many books in yourthe original english language.

I have read it with Oscar Wilde’s books, The Picture of Dorian Gray.

In the season I was very young and Iwhen i read it, and I don’t think that I don’ti understood all aspects of the book.

I should to read it again.!

Yesterday, I began to reading L’étranger one book in French language for, a french book, to practice my reading .

I don’t like morthe French oulanguage more than the Korean language though.

I don’t way… Might I couldmight be able to search for things in this languages for to like againEnglish.

One last thing: I don’haven't yet begaun to read Charlotte’s Web.

Feedback

Very good passage of writing! For someone who isn’t a native speaker, this was an excellent response, however i have noticed some grammatical errors in your writing. I think that you should perfect your grammar in order to begin writing more confidently. 🙂

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camila5fea

Feb. 21, 2023

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Thank you!!

Text 2 - english


Text 2 - eEnglish

We always capitalize languages, countries and nationalities.

Hello it’s saturday I'm sleeping much so I feel tired.


Hello it’s sSaturday I'mand i didn’t sleeping much so I feel tired.

Very good!

Hello, it’s sSaturday and I'm sleeping so much sothat I feel tired.

I tried to study but I can not because I tired and I don’t have a concentration.


I tried to study but I can not because I am tired and I don’t have athe concentration.

I tried to study but I can not because I am tired and I don’t have acan't concentratione.

Today I should to read one chapter of the book Robin Wood I think that I’ll to read later before to read this text.


Today I should towill read one chapter of the book Robin Wood. I think that I’ll to read later, before toi read this text.

Today I should to read one chapter of the book _Robin Wood_ but I think that I’ll to read it later before to read this textafter I write this journal entry.

In last week I studied English, I saw the grammar of the possessive pronom and the “must”.


In lLast week I studied English, I saw the grammar of the possessive pronom and theun “must”.

Very good! Just work on grammar and spelling!

In lLast week when I studied English, I sawread about the grammar of the possessive pronomun and the “must.

I don’t like the teacher because he have may politics problems but Keny’s course is very good.


I don’t like the teacher because he haves many politicsal problems but Keny’sthe course is very good.

I don’t like the teacher because he haves many politicsal problems but Keny’s course is very good.

I hope to learn grammar with him but the accent I’ll learn the british accent.


I hope to learn grammar with him but the accent I’ll learn is the british accent.

I hope to learn grammar with him but the accent I'll learn will be the bBritish accent.

I like british literature and I hope to read many books in your original language.


I like bBritish literature and I hope to read many books in yourthe original english language.

I like bBritish literature andso I hope to read many books in yourthe original language.

I have read it with Oscar Wilde’s books, The Picture of Dorian Gray.


I have read it with Oscar Wilde’s books, The Picture of Dorian Gray.

I have read it with Oscar Wilde’s books, _The Picture of Dorian Gray_.

We underline titles of books.

In the season I was very young and I think that I don’t understood all aspects of the book.


In the season I was very young and Iwhen i read it, and I don’t think that I don’ti understood all aspects of the book.

In the seasonWhen I read it I was very young and Iso I do not think that I don’t understood all the aspects of the book so I should read it again.

I should to read again.


I should to read it again.!

I should to read again.

Yesterday I began to read L’étranger one book in French language for to practice my reading .


Yesterday, I began to reading L’étranger one book in French language for, a french book, to practice my reading .

Yesterday I began to read a L’étranger one book in French language for to practice my reading .

I don’t like more French ou Korean language.


I don’t like morthe French oulanguage more than the Korean language though.

I don’t like more French oumore than the Korean language.

I'm not sure what you're saying so this is my best guess. Also, this sentence sounds kind of non sequitur as you haven't mentioned studying the Korean language before.

I don’t way… Might I could search things in this languages for to like again.


I don’t way… Might I couldmight be able to search for things in this languages for to like againEnglish.

I don’t way… Might I couldknow why. Maybe I can search for things in thisese languages for me to like them again.

One last thing: I don’t began to read Charlotte’s Web.


One last thing: I don’haven't yet begaun to read Charlotte’s Web.

One last thing: I don’haven't begaun to read _Charlotte’s Web_.

I don't see how this thought fits with the rest of what you've written.

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