Test for applying Cto the civil servantsice

alternatives:
- Civil Service Test
- Civil Service Application Test
- Application Test to become a Civil Servant

Yesterday, the test results ofor the people applying to be civil servant came out, hundreds and thousands examinee rushed into the website and this huge flow made it impossible to logged in.

The people looking at these tests results are not yet civil servants, as "applying civil servants" would imply.

impossible to logged in -> log in: When you have a preposition like "to" marking a target or objective, what follows is no longer the action itself, but the action in an abstract sense. It's hard to describe that in a way that even makes sense to me... but the bottom line is that the verbs which follow will be in plain form.

I finally reached this page and found that I had failed out.

There is a term "flunked out," but "out" isn't used with "failed."

In the position that I replied, eight hundreds800 citizens replied at the same time, which just wanted two.

Sorry, but this sentence is too unclear for me to provide suggestions on. I suspect maybe instead of "replied," that should be "the position for which I had applied" and that 800 other citizens had applied to the same position? But only two seats were available? I've I've guessed it all right, I'd write it like this:

"It turned out that 800 people applied for the same position, but they only accepted two."

Other positions were faced more applicant and less requirements.

Why is it so hitard(?) for civil servants reapplying?

Again, I suspect this should be "Why is it so hard *to apply for a civil servant position*".

Because the economic situation is not good nowadays.,

Either this is answering the previous sentence (which seems unlikely) or it's not a complete sentence and needs to connect to the next with a comma.

More and more merchants geot interrupted(?), and countless people lost their jobs.

get -> got: The first clause was in present tense and the second in past tense. Past tense makes more sense for both.

I'm unsure what "interrupted" means here.

Civilizations(?) lost their hope for the future.

Again, "civilizations" is unclear. Just "people"?

Over eight million Chinese applied the job for civil servants, 10 percent arisingmore than last year.

Test for applyingApplication Test for Civil sServants

Or "Test for those applying to be Civil Servants."

Yesterday, the test results of applyingthe civil servant came out,application were released and hundreds and thousands of examinees rushed into the website and tto see their results. This huge flow of people made it impossible to logged in.

I finally reached thise page and found that I had failed out.

Or "The page finally loaded and..."

InFor the position that I reapplied to, eight hundreds citizens realso applied at the same time, which just wanted twoeven though there were only two openings.

Other positions were facedhad even more applicants and lessfewer requirements.

Why is it so hit forpopular to apply to be a civil servants replying?

More and more merchants get interruptedcompanies are struggling, and countless people have lost their jobs.

Civilizationsans have lost their hope for the future.

People think that civil servants may not have a high salary, but the job is so stable thaso it can offset its shortcomings.

Over eight million Chinese applied the job for civil servants, 10 percent arising thancitizens applied to be civil servants this year, a 10 percent increase from last year.

THowever, the test has becaome more difficult, on and the other hand, the score ofrequired score needed for admission has raisedn year by year.

"On the other hand" does not work in this sentence.

If the economy still keeps continues on a downturn, many of the loser may keep fightpeople who failed this year may try againg next year.

We don't usually use "keep fighting" to talk about taking tests.