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homini

Jan. 20, 2022

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Usually, I had at least one person, either my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one. Even my hubby came home really late after work, so I took care of her from A to Z. I got sweaty while bathing a baby. She kept slipping in the wash bowl although I was holding her with one hand, the other hand having to wash her. I don't even remember how I actually did it. How clumsy mother I am who barely bathe her own baby!!
However, spending whole day with Ha-min was blessing. It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes off from the snowy window. She seemed to be possessed, for a while. lol It might have been her first view of heavy snowing.
Hope I can be a better mom.

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Usually, I hadve at least one person, eithersuch as my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.

Even my hubby came home really late after work, so I took care of her from A to Z. I got sweaty while bathing a baby.

She kept slipping in the wash bowl aleven though I was holding her with one hand, and using the other hand having to wash her.

I don't even remember how I actually did it.

How clumsy a mother I am I who can barely bathe her own baby!!

However, spending the whole day with Ha-min was a blessing.

It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes off of the snowy window. / It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes away from the snowy window.

She seemed to be possessed, for a while.

lol It might have been her first view of heavy snowing.

HI hope I can be a better mom.

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bomini님 정말 수고하십니다! 하민은 행운 아기입니다. Great job! :)

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homini

Jan. 24, 2022

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항상 고맙습니다!! ^^

Usually, I hadve at least one person, either my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.

She kept slipping in the wash bowl althoughs I was holding her with one hand, and using the other hand having to wash her.

HowWhat a clumsy mother I am who barely knows how to bathe her own baby!!

What a clumsy mother I am !

However, spending whole day with Ha-min was blessing.enjoyable.

She seemed to be possesstransfixed, for a while.

lol It might have been her first view of heavy snowingfall.

HI hope I can be a better mom.

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homini

Jan. 24, 2022

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thank you so much for your help :D

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Usually, I hadve at least one person, either my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.

Even mMy hubby came home really late after work, so I took care of her from A to Zthe entire day. I got sweaty while bathing athe baby.

She kept slipping in the wash bowl although I was holding her with one hand, the other hand having to wash and washing her with the other.

I don't even remember how I actually didmanaged to do it.

How clumsy of a mother I am whI to barely bathe here able to bathe my own baby!!

However, spending the whole day with Ha-min was a blessing.

It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes off from the snowy window.

She seemed to be possessed, for a while.

lol, It might have been her first view oftime seeing heavy snowing.

HI hope I can be a better mom.

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Very cute story.

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homini

Jan. 24, 2022

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thank you so much for your time :)

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Usually, I had at least one person, either my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.


Usually, I hadve at least one person, either my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.

Usually, I hadve at least one person, either my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.

Usually, I hadve at least one person, eithersuch as my hubby or mom-in-law, to help me take care of my baby, but today, I had no one.

Even my hubby came home really late after work, so I took care of her from A to Z. I got sweaty while bathing a baby.


Even mMy hubby came home really late after work, so I took care of her from A to Zthe entire day. I got sweaty while bathing athe baby.

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She kept slipping in the wash bowl although I was holding her with one hand, the other hand having to wash her.


She kept slipping in the wash bowl although I was holding her with one hand, the other hand having to wash and washing her with the other.

She kept slipping in the wash bowl althoughs I was holding her with one hand, and using the other hand having to wash her.

She kept slipping in the wash bowl aleven though I was holding her with one hand, and using the other hand having to wash her.

I don't even remember how I actually did it.


I don't even remember how I actually didmanaged to do it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How clumsy mother I am who barely bathe her own baby!!


How clumsy of a mother I am whI to barely bathe here able to bathe my own baby!!

HowWhat a clumsy mother I am who barely knows how to bathe her own baby!!

What a clumsy mother I am !

How clumsy a mother I am I who can barely bathe her own baby!!

However, spending whole day with Ha-min was blessing.


However, spending the whole day with Ha-min was a blessing.

However, spending whole day with Ha-min was blessing.enjoyable.

However, spending the whole day with Ha-min was a blessing.

It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes off from the snowy window.


It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes off from the snowy window.

It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes off of the snowy window. / It was so adorable to see her not taking her eyes away from the snowy window.

She seemed to be possessed, for a while.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She seemed to be possesstransfixed, for a while.

She seemed to be possessed, for a while.

lol It might have been her first view of heavy snowing.


lol, It might have been her first view oftime seeing heavy snowing.

lol It might have been her first view of heavy snowingfall.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hope I can be a better mom.


HI hope I can be a better mom.

HI hope I can be a better mom.

HI hope I can be a better mom.

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