July 17, 2020
Ten Most Populated Countries in 2100
This chart illustrates ten most populated countries in 2019, with the future amount of their population by the year of 2100.
One of the noticeable things is that three out of ten countries will lose their places, leaving four out of ten most populated countries be from Africa. Most of the countries will experience a rise of their population.
The population of China, the country with the largest population right now, will reduce drastically from 1,439 to 941 million by 2100. That will help India to become the first, with just over one and a half billion of people. Nigeria will jump to the third place, and its population will shoot three times from 206 million up to 730 million. It will bring the USA down by one position, although its population will increase conditionally from 331 to 478 million people. There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, which will go down by three position from four to seven. Meanwhile, the significant increase of nearly 100 million people will allow Pakistan stay on its current fifth position, whereas the next country - Brazil, will experience a steep drop from 213 to 177 million, that will make her last in the list. Russia, Bangladesh and Mexico will fall out of the top ten, and will be replaced by Ethiopia, Tanzania and D.R.Congo.
First sentence is a paraphrase of the task sentence: "The table below shows top ten countries with largest population in 2019, and how it is projected to change by 2100." The sample is here https://www.ielts-exam.net/academic_writing_samples_task_1/1076/
This chart illustrates the ten most populated countries in 2019, with the future amount of theirprojected population bysize for the year of 2100.
One of the noticeable things is that three out of these ten countries will lose their placesstanding, leaving four out of ten most populated countries be from AfricaAfrican countries on the list.
I didn't correct this part, but "things" is usually used in an informal context, so it wouldn't be appropriate if this is a formal paper
"Standing" or "ranking" are used when there is a hierarchy of places
Most of the countries will experience a rise of their population. increase
Saying "A rise in their population" works, but "a population increase" is more concise and formal.
"Most of the countries" or "most of these countries" would be used if you are talking about a specific list, but "most countries" would indicate most of all the countries in the world
The population of China, the country with the largest population right now, will reducesee a drastically population decrease from 1,439 to 941 million by 2100.
That will helpcause India to become the firstthe most populated country, with just over one and a half billion of people.
"help India" indicates India wants to have the largest population, which I don't believe is the case
"Inhabitants" could be used in an ultra-formal setting, but people works fine in formal paragraphs as well
"Become the first" is a little awkward, but I wasn't sure what the best way to correct it was
Nigeria will jump to the third place, and its population will shootincrease three timesfold from 206 million up to 730 million.
The previous correction was good, this is just another way of saying it more concisely ("increase three fold" means "increase to three times its current size")
It will bring the USA down by one position, although its population will increase conditionally from 331 to 478 million people.
I'm not sure what you mean by "conditionally" in "it will increase conditionally from 331..."
Also it's unclear what "It" is, in "it will bring the USA down by one position"
There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, which will go down by three positionmove from fourth to seven.th place
*I know I said "standing" and "ranking" were better for the previous sentence, but here "place" is good
Meanwhile, thea significant increase of nearly 100 million people will allow Pakistan stay on its currentremain in fifth positionlace, whereas the next country -, Brazil, will experience a steep drop from 213 to 177 million, that will make herit last ion the list.
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July 18, 2020
It will bring the USA down by one position, although its population will increase conditionally from 331 to 478 million people.
I thought 'conditionally' as a synonym to 'significantly'. I already used it in the text.
The USA's position will change from 3rd to 4th.
July 18, 2020
Thank you!
This chart illustrates the ten most populated countries in 2019, with the future amount of their population by the year of 2100.
One of the noticeable thichanges is that three out of ten of these countries will lose their places, leaving four out of ten most populated countries be from Africa.african nations on the list.
Most of the countries will experience a rise ofin their population.
That will help India to become the first, with just over one and a half billion of people.inhabitants.
Nigeria will jump to the third place, and its population will shoot up to three times its current size from 206 million up to 730 million.
There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, which will go down by three positions from four to seven.
Meanwhile, thea significant increase of nearly 100 million people will allow Pakistan to stay on its current fifth position, whereas the next country - Brazil, will experience a steep drop from 213 to 177 million, that will make herit last ion the list.
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This chart illustrates ten most populated countries in 2019, with the future amount of their population by the year of 2100. This chart illustrates the ten most populated countries in 2019, with the future amount of their population by the year of 2100. This chart illustrates the ten most populated countries in 2019, with the |
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One of the noticeable things is that three out of ten countries will lose their places, leaving four out of ten most populated countries to be from Africa. |
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Most of the countries will experience a rise of their population in projection. |
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The population of China, the country with the largest population right now, will reduce drastically from 1,439 million to 941. |
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That will help India to become the first, with just over one and a half billion of people. That will help India to become the first, with just over one and a half billion That will "help India" indicates India wants to have the largest population, which I don't believe is the case "Inhabitants" could be used in an ultra-formal setting, but people works fine in formal paragraphs as well "Become the first" is a little awkward, but I wasn't sure what the best way to correct it was |
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Nigeria will jump to the third place, and its population will shoot three times from 206 million up to 730 million. Nigeria will jump to the third place, and its population will shoot up to three times its current size from 206 million up to 730 million. Nigeria will jump to the third place, and its population will The previous correction was good, this is just another way of saying it more concisely ("increase three fold" means "increase to three times its current size") |
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It will bring the USA down by one position, although its population will increase conditionally from 331 to 478 million people. It will bring the USA down by one position, although its population will increase conditionally from 331 to 478 million people. I'm not sure what you mean by "conditionally" in "it will increase conditionally from 331..." Also it's unclear what "It" is, in "it will bring the USA down by one position" |
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There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, and will go down by three position from four to seven. |
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The significant increase of nearly 100 million people will allow Pakistan stay on its current fifth position, whereas the next country - Brazil, will experience a decrease from 213 to 177 million. |
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Russia, Bangladesh and Mexico will fall out of the top ten, and will be replaced by Ethiopia, Tanzania and D.R.Congo. |
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One of the noticeable things is that three out of ten countries will lose their places, leaving four out of ten most populated countries be from Africa. One of the noticeable One of the noticeable things is that three out of these ten countries will lose their I didn't correct this part, but "things" is usually used in an informal context, so it wouldn't be appropriate if this is a formal paper "Standing" or "ranking" are used when there is a hierarchy of places |
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Most of the countries will experience a rise of their population. Most Most of the countries will experience a Saying "A rise in their population" works, but "a population increase" is more concise and formal. "Most of the countries" or "most of these countries" would be used if you are talking about a specific list, but "most countries" would indicate most of all the countries in the world |
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The population of China, the country with the largest population right now, will reduce drastically from 1,439 to 941 million by 2100.
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There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, which will go down by three position from four to seven. There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, which will go down by three positions from four to seven. There will be only a slight increase for Indonesia, which will *I know I said "standing" and "ranking" were better for the previous sentence, but here "place" is good |
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Meanwhile, the significant increase of nearly 100 million people will allow Pakistan stay on its current fifth position, whereas the next country - Brazil, will experience a steep drop from 213 to 177 million, that will make her the last in list. |
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Meanwhile, the significant increase of nearly 100 million people will allow Pakistan stay on its current fifth position, whereas the next country - Brazil, will experience a steep drop from 213 to 177 million, that will make her last in the list. Meanwhile, Meanwhile, |
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