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koni

Feb. 12, 2021

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Temperature shifting

Since the motor in our experiment installation was placed close to the vibration sensor (about 5mm) the second one was affected by heat emission coming from the motor while it is operating. Any changes of motor power closely related to the changes of this emission, which leads to the temperature changes of the sensor. According to operating manual a sensor may drift as much as 10 Hz/°C. The shifting of frequency caused by temperature changing and calculated angular velocity therefore can be seen when the motor power is changed. The details of the linear fitting shown in two zoomed insets in Figure1. The boundaries of every 30 seconds interval, represented by green datapoints, are the places where the temperature stabilization occurs after the motor power has been changed. Black dashed lines indicate the exact moments, when the power was changed. Once a thermal stabilization had been reached the velocity shows the linear ricing (black datapoints in insets).

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Temperature shifting

Since the motor in our experiment installation was placed close to the vibration sensor (about 5mm) the second one was affected by heat emission coming from the motor while it iwas operating.

Make sure to match your tenses.

Any changes of motor power closely related to the changes of this emission, which leads to the temperature changes of the sensor.

According to operating manual, a sensor may drift as much as 10 Hz/°C.

The shifting of frequency caused by temperature changing and calculated angular velocity therefore can be seen when the motor power is changed.

The details of the linear fitting is shown in two zoomed insets in Figure 1.

The boundaries of every 30 -seconds interval, represented by green data points, are the places where the temperature stabilization occurs after the motor power has been changed.

Black dashed lines indicate the exact moments, when the power was changed.

Once a thermal stabilization had been reached, the velocity shows the linear ricing (black datapoints in insets).

Adding an extra comma can help make the sentence more understandable.
I'm not familiar with the term 'ricing' in this context - I'd just like to check you don't mean "rising"?

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Well done here. I think you should change your level to 'Intermediate' on Langcorrect.

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koni

Feb. 19, 2021

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Thank you. Wow 'intermediate', my feelings tell me it is not my level yet.

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barleytea

June 11, 2021

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Fair enough, I just thought your level was quite high :) If you're interested, Cambridge English offers a free online proficiency test on their website.

Temperature shifting


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Since the motor in our experiment installation was placed close to the vibration sensor (about 5mm) the second one was affected by heat emission coming from the motor while it is operating.


Since the motor in our experiment installation was placed close to the vibration sensor (about 5mm) the second one was affected by heat emission coming from the motor while it iwas operating.

Make sure to match your tenses.

Any changes of motor power closely related to the changes of this emission, which leads to the temperature changes of the sensor.


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According to operating manual a sensor may drift as much as 10 Hz/°C.


According to operating manual, a sensor may drift as much as 10 Hz/°C.

The shifting of frequency caused by temperature changing and calculated angular velocity therefore can be seen when the motor power is changed.


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The details of the linear fitting shown in two zoomed insets in Figure1.


The details of the linear fitting is shown in two zoomed insets in Figure 1.

The boundaries of every 30 seconds interval, represented by green datapoints, are the places where the temperature stabilization occurs after the motor power has been changed.


The boundaries of every 30 -seconds interval, represented by green data points, are the places where the temperature stabilization occurs after the motor power has been changed.

Black dashed lines indicate the exact moments, when the power was changed.


Black dashed lines indicate the exact moments, when the power was changed.

Once a thermal stabilization had been reached the velocity shows the linear ricing (black datapoints in insets).


Once a thermal stabilization had been reached, the velocity shows the linear ricing (black datapoints in insets).

Adding an extra comma can help make the sentence more understandable. I'm not familiar with the term 'ricing' in this context - I'd just like to check you don't mean "rising"?

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