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Temperature Dropping
Today is really cold in Shanghai. The temperature has been dropping since last night.
The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.
Now my throat is a bit sore. I hope it's not a cold.
TodayIt is really cold in Shanghai today.
The temperature has been dropping since last night.
The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.
Temperature Dropping / Dropping Temperature / Plummeting Temperature
In English, for a two-word title, an adjective+noun combination feels more natural than noun+verb.
Today it is really cold in Shanghai.
Adding “it” is idiomatic, although there’s nothing wrong with your original grammatically.
The temperature has been dropping since last night.
TheA sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.
Since you’re making a statement about sudden changes in general, “a sudden change” feels more natural to me than “the.”
“The body” is fine, referring to everyone’s bodies as well as your own.
Now my throat is a bit sore.
I hope it's not a cold.
Feedback
I hope it’s not a cold, too!
By the way, if you have time, could you check my November post? It only received one correction and I’d like a “second opinion.” :-)
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Temperature Dropping
Today is really cold in Shanghai.
The temperature has been dropping since last night.
The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.
Now my throat is a bit sore.
I hope it's not a cold.
The Temperature Is Dropping
Today it is really cold in Shanghai.
The temperature has been dropping since last night.
The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.
I changed it from "the" to "my" because it seemed like you were talking about your own body in particular, rather than the human body in general as "the" implied.
Now my throat is a bit sore.
I hope it's not a cold.
Feedback
Great job! I hope your throat feels better!
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Today is really cold in Shanghai. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today it is really cold in Shanghai. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today it is really cold in Shanghai. Adding “it” is idiomatic, although there’s nothing wrong with your original grammatically.
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The temperature has been dropping since last night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! The temperature has been dropping since last night. |
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The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard. The sudden change in weather always catches The sudden change in weather always catches I changed it from "the" to "my" because it seemed like you were talking about your own body in particular, rather than the human body in general as "the" implied. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Since you’re making a statement about sudden changes in general, “a sudden change” feels more natural to me than “the.” “The body” is fine, referring to everyone’s bodies as well as your own. The sudden change in weather always catches |
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