April 1, 2025
Temperature changed quickly in GuangZhou
Recently, the temperature in Guangzhou has changed quickly.
Last week it was up to 28 ℃ and even 32℃.
However, on last week's Friday evening, it dropped to 15℃ with rain.
These past two days, it has only had 9℃ to 12°C.
According to the weather report, it will get warm next Tuesday. On Tuesday, it will highly up to 30°C.
Since the temperature has been changing so fast, I have no idea what kind of clothes I should wear.
It's easy to catch a cold. As the saying goes, don't put your winter clothes in the wardrobe before the Dragon Boat Festival in May.
How about your place? Does the temperature also change fast?
广州春天温度变化很大
现在广州的天气真是变化无常。
上周温度高达28°甚至32°，突然上周五晚上伴随着下雨温度将到15°左右，这个两天更是只有9°到12°。
听天气预报说，从下周二开始天气又会回暖，周四可能高达30°。
天气变化如此之快，都不知道该怎么穿衣服了，而且很容易生病。
就像老一辈说的，未食五月粽寒衣未入栊。
大家所在的地方，天气变化也是那么快吗？
The temperature changed quickly in GuangZzhou.
The above is a sentence. If you want to write it like a title, you could say:
Quick Temperature Change in Guangzhou
Recently, the temperature in Guangzhou has changed quickly.
Last week it was up to 28 ℃ and even 32℃.
However, on last week's Friday evening, it dropped to 15℃ with rain.
These past two days, it has only hadbeen 9℃ to 12°C.
According to the weather report, it will get warm next Tuesday.
On Tuesday, it will highlyrise up to 30°C.
Since the temperature has been changing so fast, I have no idea what kind of clothes I should wear.
It's easy to catch a cold.
As the saying goes, don't put your winter clothes in theyour wardrobe before the Dragon Boat Festival in May.
How about your place?
Does the temperature also change fast?
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Yes, the weather is mercurial (changes quickly and unexpectedly) in springtime here, too.
April 2, 2025
Thank you so much! It seems the weather has become a global issue
April 3, 2025
In the places where I've lived, the springtime weather has always been unpredictable, fluctuating back & forth between extremes. This seems like 'normal' spring weather to me, even if it does change quickly. I find the changes kind of exciting. :-)
The temperature changed quickly in GuangZhou
Since it is in past tense it cannot start without 'The' otherwise it will sound improper.
Last week it was up to 28 ℃ and even 32℃.!
You feel shocked at the change in temperature.
However, on last week's Friday evening, it dropped to 15℃ with rain.
Instead of "last week's Friday" "last Friday" is used
ThesFor the past two days, it hwas only hadbetween 9℃ toand 12°C.
"has only had" is incorrect and cannot be used in the context of this sentence
According to the weather report, it will get warmer next Tuesday.
warmer instead of warm to show that it will increase next Tuesday
On Tuesday, it will highlyrise up to 30°C.
rise is a verb whereas highly is an adjective
Since the temperature has been changing so fast, I have no idea what kind of clothes I should wear.I have no idea what kind of clothes to wear because of this rapid change in the weather!
the sentence structure is not good
Does the temperature also change as fast?
April 1, 2025
i love that your trying to improve your skills , keep going and don't stop! :D
April 2, 2025
Thank you so much! It's useful for me.
Last week, it wasreached up to 28 ℃ and even 32℃.
Just a quick little comma and I added "reached up to" to emphasize the high temp :D
However, on last week's Friday evening last week, it dropped to 15℃ with rain.
I just switched the words around a little so that it can feel a bit more natural :)
These past two days, it has only hadbeen between 9℃ to 12°C.
Since you were giving a range "9 to 12" it flows a little better when you say "between" :D We also don't really use "has had" with temperature. We say "it's been" But still, great work :)
According to the weather report, it will get warm next Tuesday.
On Tuesday, it will highly up tomay reach as high as 30°C.
To indicate how high the temp is, I'd use "may reach as high as" instead. Again, just for flow and sounding more natural :D
Since the temperature has been changing so fast, I have no idea what kind of clothes I should wear.
This is perfect :D
As the saying goes, don't put your winter clothes in the wardrobe before the Dragon Boat Festival in May.
This is great too! No changes needed and I also love this quote :D
How about your place?
This sentence is perfect the way it is, but you could also try "How about where you are?" for a little more clarity if you'd like.
DoeIs the temperature also change fasting quickly?
Just a little grammar tweak. "change fast" should be "changing quickly" :)
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Overall, this was great! I loved hearing about the weather where you are. Here in Germany, the weather also changes quickly :D Some days it's bright, sunny, and beautiful. Other days it's dreary, rainy, and the sky is full of nothing but gray. Sometimes it's hard to know if I should wear a jacket or not :D I guess that this strange random weather phenomenon is a global thing not just an issue here. Anyway, good luck with your English learning! You're doing great already :)
April 2, 2025
Thank you so much! It's useful for me.
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Temperature changed quickly in GuangZhou The temperature changed quickly in GuangZhou Since it is in past tense it cannot start without 'The' otherwise it will sound improper. The temperature changed quickly in Guang The above is a sentence. If you want to write it like a title, you could say: Quick Temperature Change in Guangzhou |
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Last week it was up to 28 ℃ and even 32℃. Last week, it Just a quick little comma and I added "reached up to" to emphasize the high temp :D Last week it was up to 28 ℃ and even 32℃ You feel shocked at the change in temperature. Last week it was up to 28 |
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However, on last week's Friday evening, it dropped to 15℃ with rain. However, on I just switched the words around a little so that it can feel a bit more natural :) However Instead of "last week's Friday" "last Friday" is used However, |
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These past two days, it has only had 9℃ to 12°C. These past two days, it has only Since you were giving a range "9 to 12" it flows a little better when you say "between" :D We also don't really use "has had" with temperature. We say "it's been" But still, great work :)
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According to the weather report, it will get warm next Tuesday. According to the weather report, it will get warm next Tuesday. According to the weather report, it will get warmer next Tuesday. warmer instead of warm to show that it will increase next Tuesday This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On Tuesday, it will highly up to 30°C. On Tuesday, it To indicate how high the temp is, I'd use "may reach as high as" instead. Again, just for flow and sounding more natural :D On Tuesday, it will rise is a verb whereas highly is an adjective On Tuesday, it will |
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Since the temperature has been changing so fast, I have no idea what kind of clothes I should wear. Since the temperature has been changing so fast, I have no idea what kind of clothes I should wear. This is perfect :D
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It's easy to catch a cold. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As the saying goes, don't put your winter clothes in the wardrobe before the Dragon Boat Festival in May. As the saying goes, don't put your winter clothes in the wardrobe before the Dragon Boat Festival in May. This is great too! No changes needed and I also love this quote :D As the saying goes, don't put your winter clothes in |
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How about your place? How about your place? This sentence is perfect the way it is, but you could also try "How about where you are?" for a little more clarity if you'd like. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Does the temperature also change fast?
Just a little grammar tweak. "change fast" should be "changing quickly" :) Does the temperature also change as fast? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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