April 2, 2021
Tell us about your hobbies. What do you like and dislike?
I am an active person and hobbies have been always present in my life. I never feel like doing nothing.
My oldest hobby is to read, I like because I learn new things and I find it relaxing. I do it since I was a child but my preferences have changed over the years. Initially I tended to read science fiction and adventure novels. Historical events books came latter. Nowadays I switch between Japanese literature, graphic novel and profound themes (religion or psychology books.). I guess it’s a consequence of getting older.
Another indoor hobby that I enjoy a lot is crafting. Specifically, I like to sew presents for my relatives, using colorful fabrics. Because I work all day bored in front of a computer, using my hands during my free time to create these objects releases this creative part of mine.
Finally, I like to travel and hike. I love nature and I sometimes practice outdoor yoga. Maybe because, I am a curious person I feel like an explorer, every new place is a discovery.
Soy una persona activa y las aficiones siempre han estado presentes en mi vida. Nunca tengo ganas de no hacer nada.
Mi afición más antigua es la lectura, me gusta porque aprendo cosas nuevas y lo encuentro relajante. Lo hago desde que era niña pero mis preferencias han ido cambiando con los años. Inicialmente tendía a leer novelas de ciencia ficción y aventuras. Los libros de acontecimientos históricos llegaron después. Hoy en día combino literatura japonesa, novela gráfica y temas profundos (libros de religión o psicología). Supongo que es una consecuencia de envejecer.
Otro pasatiempo de interior que disfruto mucho es la artesanía. En concreto, me gusta coser regalos para mis familiares, usando telas de colores. Debido a que trabajo todo el día aburrida frente a un ordenador, usar mis manos durante mi tiempo libre para crear estos objetos libera mi parte creativa.
Finalmente, me gusta viajar y caminar. Amo la naturaleza ya veces practico yoga al aire libre. Quizás porque, soy una persona curiosa, me siento exploradora, cada nuevo lugar es un descubrimiento.
Tell us about your hobbies. What do you like and dislike?
I am an active person and hobbies have been always been present in my life.
I never feel like doing nothing.
My oldest hobby is to read, I like to read because I learn new things, and I find it relaxing.
Always put a comma before a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) when it is connecting two independent clauses.
I dohave been doing it since I was a child, but my preferences have changed over the years.
Saying "I have been reading since I was a child..." would be more clear, but since it is mentioned previously you don't need to mention reading again.
Initially, I tended to read science fiction and adventure novels.
Use a comma following transitions.
Historical events books came latterThen, I started reading books about historical events.
This isn't a complete sentence. I think it would be better combined with the previous sentence, or as I suggest in my correction.
Nowadays, I switch between Japanese literature, graphic novels, and profound themes (religion or psychology books.).
You wouldn't hear the phrase "profound themes" very much, at least in American English. It is correct usage though, considering the depth that religious and scientific books can have.
I guess it’s a consequence of getting older.
Another indoor hobby that I enjoy a lot is crafting.
Specifically, I like to sew presents for my relatives, using colorful fabrics.
BecausSince I work all day bored in front of a computer, using my hands during my free time to create these objects releases thismy creative part of mineity.
A general rule of thumb is to never start a sentence with "because."
Finally, I like to travel and hike.
I love nature, and I sometimes practice outdoor yoga.
Maybe because, I am a curious person, I feel like an explorer,; every new place is a discovery.
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This was a really well-written essay! The biggest mistakes were small grammar issues. It was incredibly easy to understand!
Tell us about your hobbies. What do you like and dislike?
I am an active person and hobbies have been always present in my life.
I never feel like doing nothing.
My oldest hobby is to read,ing, which I like because I learn new things and I find it relaxing.
I dohave been doing it since I was a child but my preferenctastes have changed over the years.
"preferences" definitely works here, but I think "tastes" sounds a bit better. Up to you how you want to say it, though :)
Initially I tended to read science fiction and adventure novels.
Historical events books came latter.
"Then came books about historical events" sounds a bit clearer. It's also fine to say "Later I started reading books about historical events".
Nowadays I switch between Japanese literature, graphic novels and profound themes (religion or psychology books.).
"profound themes" isn't really used. Maybe rephrase as "deeper subjects" or "more thought-provoking subjects"
I guess it’s a consequence of getting older.
Another indoor hobby that I enjoy a lot is crafting.
Specifically, I like to sew presents for my relatives, using colorful fabrics.
"sew presents" - perhaps rephrase as "sew clothing/bags/whatever as presents"
Because I work all day bored in front of a computer, using my hands during my free time to create these objects releases this creative part of mineis an outlet for my creativity.
"objects" is a bit formal, perhaps say "things" or "crafts"
Finally, I like to travel and hike.
I think "finally" is often used to talk about the last event in a sequence of events. Maybe replace with "furthermore", or "moreover", or "in addition"?
I love nature and I sometimes practice outdoor yoga.
Maybe because, I am a curious person, I feel like an explorer, and every new place is a discovery.
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Great job! Your grammar is really good :)
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I do it since I was a child but my preferences have changed over the years. I "preferences" definitely works here, but I think "tastes" sounds a bit better. Up to you how you want to say it, though :) I Saying "I have been reading since I was a child..." would be more clear, but since it is mentioned previously you don't need to mention reading again. |
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Initially I tended to read science fiction and adventure novels. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Initially, I tended to read science fiction and adventure novels. Use a comma following transitions. |
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Historical events books came latter. Historical events books came lat "Then came books about historical events" sounds a bit clearer. It's also fine to say "Later I started reading books about historical events".
This isn't a complete sentence. I think it would be better combined with the previous sentence, or as I suggest in my correction. |
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Nowadays I switch between Japanese literature, graphic novel and profound themes (religion or psychology books.). Nowadays I switch between Japanese literature, graphic novels and profound themes (religion or psychology books.). "profound themes" isn't really used. Maybe rephrase as "deeper subjects" or "more thought-provoking subjects" Nowadays, I switch between Japanese literature, graphic novels, and profound themes (religion or psychology books You wouldn't hear the phrase "profound themes" very much, at least in American English. It is correct usage though, considering the depth that religious and scientific books can have. |
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Another indoor hobby that I enjoy a lot is crafting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Specifically, I like to sew presents for my relatives, using colorful fabrics. Specifically, I like to sew presents for my relatives, using colorful fabrics. "sew presents" - perhaps rephrase as "sew clothing/bags/whatever as presents" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because I work all day bored in front of a computer, using my hands during my free time to create these objects releases this creative part of mine. Because I work all day bored in front of a computer, using my hands during my free time to create these objects "objects" is a bit formal, perhaps say "things" or "crafts"
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Finally, I like to travel and hike. Finally, I like to travel and hike. I think "finally" is often used to talk about the last event in a sequence of events. Maybe replace with "furthermore", or "moreover", or "in addition"? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love nature and I sometimes practice outdoor yoga. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I love nature, and I sometimes practice outdoor yoga. |
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