I actually agree with the teenagers those howat they are able to make their own decisions because I think they are awaire enupheough to consider their lives and take many resolutdecisions.

All wthat the parents can do is just keep watching their children and correct their directecisions that probably can be wrong.

Better to pick one of "probably" or "can"

Espiecially conswhen it comes to decisions concerning friends , adults should be careful and interested in this essential topic because teenagers are attractinged by friends when they spend a long time with them.

Generally studies and education only teenagers are only allowed to consider themstudies and education.

The parents can advise their kids and make sure that they are working hard on them selves and, encourage them and give the the support that they need to improve their skills.

In my experiences, I see that teenagers are responsible, reliable, and depaendebable people but they probably make mistackes , that why their parent must address their destenieconsider their paths and protect them always.

I think the word you tried to use is "destinies" but destiny has a very strong, almost "inevitable" meaning to it, so is a very strong word to use and is probably too strong to use here.

You've used "address" a lot, but it's a very formal word to use and doesn't fit most of the time, so it's better to choose another word most of the time.