This writingentry is about where camels really come from.

Writing is usually used more generally, not about a specific written thing. You could also say I'm going to write about where camels really come from.

I got to knowlearned about a paleobiologist from this video.

If you say you got to know a paleobiologist it's like you met a specific person who's a paleobiologist and learned personal details.

I think people who work in this kind of fields looks are great.

Saying they look great is commenting on their physical appearance.

Because pPaleobiologists have to be delicate to find fossil which isbecause fossils can range in size from tiny to huge things.(?). In addition, fossils arit can be hard to tell what those are's actually a fossil.

Those are similar withey can look like a piece of wood andor other things when thosey are broken into small pieces.

andThe process of finding evidences is stressful if those asince it's hard to tell if you're right or wrong.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, so I'm not sure if my correction is right.

In this video, the paleobiologist was finding many piecesa lot of bone pieces in the ice and, digging up old dead stuffs.

And sShe then pieced them together.

sShe struggled with finding lab that could findidentify what animal the bones are from.

I can’t imagine how hard theat process areis.

I thank paleobiologists who discover facts ofrom the pasts.

Finally it turned out what it iwas.

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It iwas a camel.

I think it would flow more naturally if you changed the two sentences to say something more like. "Finally they figured out what it was. It turns out it was a camel."

I didn't know that they live anywhere else.

I think that's what you're trying to say here.

I found out Cthat camels would have lived around the north pole, c. Camels came from America, and primitive camels would have been really small like a rabbit.

I was freaked out to know thisLearning that freaked me out.

Rabbit -sized camels?

wWow.

how cute those arThey're so cute.

HThe history of evolution is amazing.

How did they adapt a lot ofto so many environments?

They must have adapted to new environments withusing things they already had.

Bbecause I don't think they can’tould evolve in such a short time.

SoAt least that's whyat I think like thaought.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, but it seems like in the previous sentence you're saying what you used to think they you go on to say how you'll have to change how you think. That would make this sentence kind of a transition between the two thoughts.

I think to understand this, I'll have to readjust and reimagine my thoughts.think things,

Bbe flexible.

There are so many mysteries that we don't understand in this world.