Jan. 30, 2023
Technology
At first glance, everything that comes with technology is positive. But, all that glitters is not gold because excessive dependence (or dependency?) on technological advances could be harmful. There is a fine line between convenience and laziness.
What's more, the use of some technologies are reducing our capabilities. For instance, nowadays many people are unable to get by in an unknown city without using a GPS.
As far as I am concerned the main invention in the last years was the Internet.
One reason for thinking this is it changed the way we buy all kind of things.
Another reason is it gives us access to a massive information of any type.
Last but not least, the Internet is the biggest advance in the human history in relation with communication between people.
To sum up, most technological advances are great, but we have to set the limit to not overuse them and create a wrong dependency.
Technology
At first glance, everything that comes with technology iappears positive.
But, all that glitters is not gold because excessive dependence (or dependency?) on technological advances could be harmful.
I think dependence works better here.
There is a fine line between convenience and laziness.
What's more, the use of some technologies are reducing our capabilities.
For instance, nowadays many people are unable to get by in an unknown city without using a GPS.
As far as I am concerned, the main invention in the last yearfew decades was the Internet.
One reason for thinking this is it changed the way we buy all kinds of things.
Another reason is it gives us access to a massive trove of information of any type.
Last but not least, the Internet is the biggest advance in the human history in relation withgards to communication between people.
To sum up, most technological advances are great, but we have to set thea limit to not overuse them and create a wrongto avoid creating harmful dependencyies.
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Good work!
Feb. 1, 2023
I appreciate your assistance in this matter.
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At first glance, everything that comes with technology iseems positive.
Nothing wrong with your sentence here - however, usually, "at first glance" is paired with "seems"
But, all that glitters is not gold because excessive dependence (or dependency?)y on technological advances could be harmful.
There is a fine line between convenience and laziness.
What's more, the use of some technologies are reducing our capabilities.
For instance, nowadays many people are unable to get byaround in an unknown city without using a GPS.
"get by" = survive, often used in the context of money
As far as I am concerned the main invention in the last years was the Internet.
One reason for thinking this is that it changed the way we buy all kind of things.
Another reason is that it gives us access to a massive amount of information of any type.
Last but not least, the Internet is the biggest advance in the human history in relation withed to communication between people.
To sum up, most technological advances are great, but we have to set the limits to not overuse them and create a wrongnegative dependencyies.
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Great job overall - the corrections I made were mainly to improve the flow of the writing, not grammatical.
Feb. 1, 2023
Thanks for your hard work on this.
One reason for thinking this is it changed the way we buy all kinds of things.
I think "all kind of things" works, but typically we say "kinds of things" because it flows better!
To sum it up, most technological advances are great, but we have to set the limit to not overuse them and create a wrong dependency.
The expression is usually "to sum IT up"
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Very good! The few mistakes you made were very tiny and didn't impact my understanding at all.
Feb. 1, 2023
Much obliged.
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But, all that glitters is not gold because excessive dependence (or dependency?) on technological advances could be harmful. But, all that glitters is not gold because excessive dependenc But I think dependence works better here. |
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