Distance is not any issue to communicate with each other asion now we have the Internet.

Sending doves as it was not so much timelong ago, or even sending paper letters are falling into oblivold fashioned.

It is indeed something out of the ordinary how fast our world is developing.

Noneevertheless, a great advances in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another one.

This is specially certaintrue regarding communication.

There are tons of social media outsideapps for you to discover.

Noneevertheless, it is quite interesting that while having all thoese easinessesmethods of communication, we can still feel alone and forgotten.

There was some news that made an impact on me.

Or "a news article/report that"

An old man tolsaid that he was more lonely than ever.

"Told" is used if there is a person or object that is being told
e.g. He told me
So If you wanted to use "told" in this sentence you would say "He told the reporter/news outlet"

Now, with smartphones, there was no need for theirhis grandchildren (to go) to visit him.

It isn't necessary to add "to go" in this sentence

Development is growincreasing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep up with the pace of it.

"Development" is already a type of growth so it would be better to use a different word

However, hwe should pay attention thato our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time,. We are at risk if we just forget that close contact that makes us feel beloved and appreciated.

Nowadays, young people are exposed to these media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through any apppps rather than meeting in person.

As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to thate anonymity the Internet offers.

We oughmust not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made.

Noneevertheless, do not trust on that way that easiit completely; remember that human contact is a psychologically a need.

Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you doid not step ahead and cross that technological gap.

Distance is not any issue to communicate with each other as now we have the Iinternet.

No need for capitalization of 'internet'.

Sending doves as it was not so much time ago or even sending paper letters are falling into oblivion.

I would remove 'as it was not so much time ago', it's unneeded here

It is indeed something out of the ordinary how fast our world is developing.

It's all ways out of 'the' ordinary.

Nonetheless, a great advancement in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another one.

This is especially certainevident regarding communication.

There are tons of social media outsidesites/apps for you to discover.

'Outside' is unneeded. Outside of what? It's on/in a phone

Nonetheless, it is quite interesting that having all thoese so easinessesly accessible, we can still feel alone and forgotten.

'Easinesses' here doesn't work, I gave you an alternative way of saying it

There was a piece of news that made an large impact on me.

I would say when this happened - such as recently, a long time ago
Also maybe say 'a large impact'

An old man told said that he was more lonely than ever.

Now, with smartphones, there was no need for theirhis grandchildren to go toand visit him.

You're talking about him, so use the correct pronoun - his

He mentioned that there was a time when all of his family would gather and pay him a visit.

Development is growing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep ptracek of it.

Going against it would be a preposterous nonsense.

Nonsense is uncountable so you do not need a defining article - a/the.

However, hwe should pay attention that our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time, are at risk if we just forget that close contact that makes us feel beloved and appreciated.

I think you meant to say 'we' instead of 'he'.

Nowadays, young people are exposed to theseis media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through any app than meeting in person.

As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to thate anonymity the Iinternet offers.

We ought not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made.

I would use - built, formed, or created instead of made since your piece of writing is rather academic, formal, and high level.

Nonetheless, do not trust on that way thatso easily; remember that human contact is psychologically a need.

Could you imagine your childhood without those hugs or those tender kisses from your beloved peopleones?

Beloved is different from loved, this is also a collocation to say 'loved ones'.

Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you do not step ahead and cross thate technological gap.