Dec. 30, 2024
1. Analyze the requirements of high-paying positions and accurately improve skills
A bottle of water may cost one yuan in a supermarket, 20 yuan in a scenic spot, and 50 yuan in a five-star hotel. The water has not changed. It is not the water that determines the value of water, but the market. So what skills do you want to learn? It is not to learn anything you want to learn, but to look at the current large companies and positions that are 10K higher than your current salary. What abilities do they need? For example, most visual designers in large companies need 3D capabilities, and it is easier to go to large companies with starting salaries? It is relatively high. So if you learn 3D, it is not to look at what the marketing account of the organization tells you to learn. What do we need to learn for high-paying positions in the market?
提升技能涨薪技法
1.剖析高薪岗位要求,精准提升技能
一瓶水如果是超市里可能就是一块钱,如果在景区里就是20块,在五星级酒店里可能就是50块一瓶,水没有变,决定水价值的不是水是市场。所以你要学习什么技能,不是想到什么学十么,而是去看现在大厂和比你目前薪资+10K的岗位,他们需要具备什么能力,比如大部分大厂的视觉设计师都需要会3D能力,而大厂起薪都是更容易去大厂?是相对来说比较高的,那你学习了3D是不而不是看机构营销号让你学啥你去学啥市场的高薪岗位需要什么我们去学什么
It is not the water itself that determines the value of water, but the market.
IWhat's important is not to learn anything you want to learn, but to look at the current large companies and positions that are 10K higher than your current salary.
For example, most visual designers in large companies need 3D capabilities, and it is easier to go to large companies with starting salaret a relatively high starting salary at large companies?.
It is relatively high.
Combined this sentence with the previous sentence.
So if you learn 3D, it is not to look at what the marketing account of the organization tells you to learn.
Not sure I understand this... I think your previous sentences are saying you should learn 3D so you can get a high salary, but this sentence seems to be saying you should not? I don't know exactly who "the marketing account (division?) of the organization (your current job?)" is.
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These are complex ideas! Some parts are a little unclear to me, but you did good work!
Analyze the requirements of high-paying positions and accurately improve skills
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A bottle of water may cost one yuan in a supermarket, 20 yuan in a scenic spot, and 50 yuan in a five-star hotel.
The water has not changed.
It is not the water thatitself which determines the its value of water, but the market.
So what skills do you want to learn?
IThe point is not to learn anything you want to learn, but to look at the current large companies and positions thatsimply learn whatever you want, but rather to look at positions within large companies whose salaries are 10K higher than your current salarys.
What abilities do they need?
For example, most visual designers in large companies need 3D capabilities, and it is easier to go to large companies withthey also have better starting salaries?.
Not entirely sure, but I think that was the intent of your second clause
It is relatively high.
Unclear what it refers to here
So iIf you learn 3D, it is not to look atshould not be because of what the marketing account of the organization tells you to learn.
What do we need to learn for high-paying positions in the market?
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There are some strong individual sentences, but at times I struggle to follow your overall train of thought. It could be worth reordering or restructuring some of the sentences to make your point more clear
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It is not the water that determines the value of water, but the market. It is not the water It is not the water itself that determines the value of water, but the market. |
So what skills do you want to learn? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It is not to learn anything you want to learn, but to look at the current large companies and positions that are 10K higher than your current salary.
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Analyze the requirements of high-paying positions and accurately improve skills A bottle of water may cost one yuan in a supermarket, 20 yuan in a scenic spot, and 50 yuan in a five-star hotel. Analyze the requirements of high-paying positions and accurately improve skills |
The water has not changed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
What abilities do they need? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
For example, most visual designers in large companies need 3D capabilities, and it is easier to go to large companies with starting salaries? For example, most visual designers in large companies need 3D capabilities, and Not entirely sure, but I think that was the intent of your second clause For example, most visual designers in large companies need 3D capabilities, and it is easier to g |
It is relatively high. It is relatively high. Unclear what it refers to here
Combined this sentence with the previous sentence. |
So if you learn 3D, it is not to look at what the marketing account of the organization tells you to learn.
So if you learn 3D, it is not to look at what the marketing account of the organization tells you to learn. Not sure I understand this... I think your previous sentences are saying you should learn 3D so you can get a high salary, but this sentence seems to be saying you should not? I don't know exactly who "the marketing account (division?) of the organization (your current job?)" is. |
What do we need to learn for high-paying positions in the market? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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