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Iri_na31

March 16, 2024

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Teamworking

The article gives much information on teamworking

Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something. It’s the ability to work with others and to help others attain their full potential and achieve the shared goals. So a good teamwork is the key to success of any company.

How to recognize unproductive teamwork? Pay more attention to planning workshops and meetings. For example, workshops should be well thought out and limited in time. It is also important to avoid frequent arguments and unhealthy level of competition.

According to the text we can highlight 6 factors that we should form in the team.
Firstly, the goals need to be realistic and attainable.
Secondly, the team must have open communication. Every team member should have the opportunity to express their opinion freely.
A successful team beats with one heart so it is essential to consider the suggestions of each member – and this is the third thing about a productive team – the involvement of all team members.
Next rule is conflict resolution. Conflicts play a vital role on resolving misunderstandings and you will make a big mistake if they are avoided. It’s also important to know how to overcome any differences in the team.
The fifth factor is the presence of a strong leader in a team.
And last but not least – measuring progress against goals. It’s actually a good thing that adds motivation

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Teamworking

'Teamworking' is not a word we have in English it is more common to say Teamwork

The article gives mucha lot of information onabout teamworking ¶


Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.

By changing 'much' to 'a lot of' it makes more grammatical sense
Also changing 'to' to 'about' is more correct

So ahaving good teamwork is the key to the success of any company.

Just a little change in the word order makes the sentence easier to read.

How to recognize unproductive teamwork?

Conflicts play a vital role on resolving misunderstandings and you will makit would be a big mistake if they are avoided.

while yours is not wrong it reads better this way in my opinion

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While the english is correct and readable there, small changes in the word order is helpful to make the points more understandable. I would suggest putting more examples into the last two points as all of the others have examples and the last do not.

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Iri_na31

April 10, 2024

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Thank you so much

The article gives much information on teamworking ¶


Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.

So a good teamwork is the key to success of any company.

For example, workshops should be well thought out and limited in time.

It is also important to avoid frequent arguments and an unhealthy level of competition.

NThe next rule is conflict resolution.

Conflicts plays a vital role oin resolving misunderstandings and you will make a big mistake if they areis isn't avoided.

Teamworking

The article gives mucha lot of information on teamworking ¶

. Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.

You can say "much" but it sounds a little old-fashioned.

It’s the ability to work with others and to help others attain their full potential and achieve the shared goals.

So a good teamwork is the key to success ofor any company.

How tocan we recognize unproductive teamwork?

The sentence is correct but this flows better.

Pay more attention to planning workshops and meetings.

For example, workshops should be well thought out and limited in time.

It is also important to avoid frequent arguments and unhealthy level of competition.

According to the text we can highlight 6, there are six factors that we should form icus on twhen we form a team.

In (formal) written English, numbers under ten are typically written out.

Firstly, the goals need to be realistic and attainable.

Secondly, the team must have open communication.

Every team member should have the opportunity to express their opinion freely.

A successful team beats with one heart so it is essential to consider the suggestions of each member – and this is the third thing about a productive team – the involvement of all team members.

NThe next rule is conflict resolution.

Conflicts play a vital role onfor resolving misunderstandings and you will make a big mistake if they are avoidedby avoiding them.

It’s also important to know how to overcome any differences in the team.

The fifth factor is the presence of a strong leader in athe team.

And last but not least – measuring progress against goals.

It’s actually a good thing that adds motivation

Feedback

A very well written piece! One thing I will mention is try to be consistent with using "it's" or "it is". In conversation it's okay to switch between the two, but in formal writing or an exam it's important to stick to "it is".

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Iri_na31

March 25, 2024

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Thanks a lot!

So a good teamwork is the key to success of any company.


So a good teamwork is the key to success ofor any company.

So a good teamwork is the key to success of any company.

So ahaving good teamwork is the key to the success of any company.

Just a little change in the word order makes the sentence easier to read.

How to recognize unproductive teamwork?


How tocan we recognize unproductive teamwork?

The sentence is correct but this flows better.

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Pay more attention to planning workshops and meetings.


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Teamworking


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Teamworking

'Teamworking' is not a word we have in English it is more common to say Teamwork

The article gives much information on teamworking Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.


The article gives mucha lot of information on teamworking ¶

. Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.

You can say "much" but it sounds a little old-fashioned.

The article gives much information on teamworking ¶


Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.

The article gives mucha lot of information onabout teamworking ¶


Teamwork is not just a group of people doing something.

By changing 'much' to 'a lot of' it makes more grammatical sense Also changing 'to' to 'about' is more correct

It’s the ability to work with others and to help others attain their full potential and achieve the shared goals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Conflicts play a vital role on resolving misunderstandings and you will make a big mistake if they are avoided.


Conflicts play a vital role onfor resolving misunderstandings and you will make a big mistake if they are avoidedby avoiding them.

Conflicts plays a vital role oin resolving misunderstandings and you will make a big mistake if they areis isn't avoided.

Conflicts play a vital role on resolving misunderstandings and you will makit would be a big mistake if they are avoided.

while yours is not wrong it reads better this way in my opinion

It’s also important to know how to overcome any differences in the team.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The fifth factor is the presence of a strong leader in a team.


The fifth factor is the presence of a strong leader in athe team.

And last but not least – measuring progress against goals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s actually a good thing that adds motivation


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, workshops should be well thought out and limited in time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, workshops should be well thought out and limited in time.

It is also important to avoid frequent arguments and unhealthy level of competition.


It is also important to avoid frequent arguments and unhealthy level of competition.

It is also important to avoid frequent arguments and an unhealthy level of competition.

According to the text we can highlight 6 factors that we should form in the team.


According to the text we can highlight 6, there are six factors that we should form icus on twhen we form a team.

In (formal) written English, numbers under ten are typically written out.

Firstly, the goals need to be realistic and attainable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Secondly, the team must have open communication.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every team member should have the opportunity to express their opinion freely.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A successful team beats with one heart so it is essential to consider the suggestions of each member – and this is the third thing about a productive team – the involvement of all team members.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Next rule is conflict resolution.


NThe next rule is conflict resolution.

NThe next rule is conflict resolution.

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