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April 2, 2023

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Teaching My Friend Go

I‘d like to talk about the experience of teaching one of my friends to play Go.

We were in primary school, and he grew a massive interest in playing Go as I talked about how glamorous it was. Then I invited him to my home during the summer break to teach him.

Although I was an advanced player then, I still found it tricky to teach a beginner and impart my knowledge/skills, as this was my first time doing this. I decided to read some Go books and watch videos by other Go instructors. It helped a lot. I was able to communicate more clearly about my understanding of this sport and to share my expertise. My friend learned basic rules and techniques in just a few weeks.

I was proud of what I had done because I not only improved my teaching skill but also shared something wonderful and precious with other people.

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Teaching My Friend Go

I‘d like to talk about the experience of teaching one of my friends how to play Go.

We were in primary school, and he grew a massive interest in playing Go as I talked about how glamorouswonderful it was.

"Glamorous" more refers to outer beauty, and we wouldn't really use it to describe a game. Maybe "wonderful" or "great"?

Then I invited him to my home during the summer break to teach him.

Although I was an advanced player then, I still found it tricky to teach a beginner and impart my knowledge/skills, as this was my first time doing this.

I decided to read some Go books and watch videos by other Go instructors.

It helped a lot.

I was able to communicate more clearly about my understanding of this sportgame and to share my expertise.

My friend learned basic rules and techniques in just a few weeks.

I was proud of what I had done because I not only improved my teaching skill but also shared something wonderful and precious with other people.

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Very good! I've never heard of the game Go!

Teaching My Friend Go


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I‘d like to talk about the experience of teaching one of my friends to play Go.


I‘d like to talk about the experience of teaching one of my friends how to play Go.

We were in primary school, and he grew a massive interest in playing Go as I talked about how glamorous it was.


We were in primary school, and he grew a massive interest in playing Go as I talked about how glamorouswonderful it was.

"Glamorous" more refers to outer beauty, and we wouldn't really use it to describe a game. Maybe "wonderful" or "great"?

Then I invited him to my home during the summer break to teach him.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although I was an advanced player then, I still found it tricky to teach a beginner and impart my knowledge/skills, as this was my first time doing this.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I decided to read some Go books and watch videos by other Go instructors.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It helped a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was able to communicate more clearly about my understanding of this sport and to share my expertise.


I was able to communicate more clearly about my understanding of this sportgame and to share my expertise.

My friend learned basic rules and techniques in just a few weeks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was proud of what I had done because I not only improved my teaching skill but also shared something wonderful and precious with other people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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