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SummerTeaWater

July 28, 2021

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Tea Regular Delivery Service

I really like drinking tea, so I usually drink more than four cups during everyday job.

Last year, I joined a regular delivery service which is about sending more than 20 tea bags a month.

At first, I could enjoy various kinds of teas like oolong tea, green tea, black tea and even fermented tea.

After time goes on, teas were stocked and it was not easy to consume all of them.

I decided to share them with my coworkers who love tea as well.

In the end, I can reduce my stored teas and they can enjoy many kinds of teas.

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Tea Regular Tea Delivery Service

I really like drinking tea, so I usually drink more than four cups duringat work every day job.

"everyday" = ordinary

"every day" = all days

A lot of native speakers get this wrong!

Last year, I joined a regular delivery service which is about sendings more than 20 tea bags a month.

At first, I could enjoyenjoyed the various kinds of teas like oolong tea, green tea, black tea and even fermented tea.

This just sounds more natural.

After time goeswent on, teas were stockedhe teas started to pile up and it was not easy to consume all of them / it was difficult to use them all up.

"Pile up" means "collect or accumulate so that you have too many". "Use up" means "consume all".

I decided to share them with my coworkers who love tea as well.

In the end, I canwas able to reduce my stored of teas and they can enjoy many kinds of teas now too.

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Good work. This sounds great. I love tea too!

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SummerTeaWater

July 28, 2021

402

Thank you so much! Tea is love!

Tea Regular Delivery Service


Tea Regular Tea Delivery Service

I really like drinking tea, so I usually drink more than four cups during everyday job.


I really like drinking tea, so I usually drink more than four cups duringat work every day job.

"everyday" = ordinary "every day" = all days A lot of native speakers get this wrong!

Last year, I joined a regular delivery service which is about sending more than 20 tea bags a month.


Last year, I joined a regular delivery service which is about sendings more than 20 tea bags a month.

At first, I could enjoy various kinds of teas like oolong tea, green tea, black tea and even fermented tea.


At first, I could enjoyenjoyed the various kinds of teas like oolong tea, green tea, black tea and even fermented tea.

This just sounds more natural.

After time goes on, teas were stocked and it was not easy to consume all of them.


After time goeswent on, teas were stockedhe teas started to pile up and it was not easy to consume all of them / it was difficult to use them all up.

"Pile up" means "collect or accumulate so that you have too many". "Use up" means "consume all".

I decided to share them with my coworkers who love tea as well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the end, I can reduce my stored teas and they can enjoy many kinds of teas.


In the end, I canwas able to reduce my stored of teas and they can enjoy many kinds of teas now too.

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