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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 22, 2022

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Tea Delivery Service

I usually drink more than three cups of tea every day, because I really like tea.

One day, my friend recommended me to use the tea delivery service.

It delivers more than 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but also oorong tea and green tea are possible to use.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite tea and new kind of tea.

I hope there will be other tea delivery service to enjoy other ones.

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Tea Delivery Service

I usually drink more than three cups of tea every day, because I really like tea.

One day, my friend recommended me to use theis tea deliverysubscription service.

If I am understanding your sentences correctly, what you are describing sounds more like a "subscription service" rather than a "delivery service."

It delivers more than 20 tea bags a month, and not on - mostly black te,a, but also ooroolong tea and green tea are also possible to use.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite teas and try new kinds of teas.

I hope there will bare other tea deliverysubscription services to enjoy other oneshat I can enjoy.

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잘 했습니다! 이건 너무 재밌어요. 저도 제가 가장 좋아하는 히비스커스 차를 온라인에서 주문해요.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 23, 2022

402

고맙습니다! 저도 히비스커스 차를 즐겨 먹어요.

Tea Delivery Service

I usually drink more than three cups of tea every day, because I really like tea.

One day, my friend recommended me tothat I use the tea delivery service.

It deliversThey send more than 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but alsoa, they can also deliver to you oorong tea and green tea are possible to use.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite tea ands well as new kinds of tea.

I hope there will bare other tea delivery service tos so that I can enjoy other ones as well.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

Tea Delivery Service

I uUsually, I drink more than three cups of tea every day, because I really like itea.

Since you have already mentioned tea, you can use "it" instead of repeating tea

One day, my friend recommended me to use thea tea delivery service to me.

It delivers more thanover 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but also oorlong tea and green (tea are possible to use).

With this service, I can enjoy my favourite tea and new kinds of tea.

I hope there will be othermore tea delivery service to enjoy other ones.

Do you mean you want more services like this? (I have corrected it as if you do)

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Nice writing :)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 22, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Tea Delivery Service

One day, my friend recommended me to use thea tea delivery service to me.

It deliversThey will send you more than 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but also oorong tea and green tea are possible to use.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite tea and try new kind of teas.

I hope there will be othermore tea delivery services to enjoy other oneseven more tea.

This is written that you want more companies that do this, but maybe you mean you want more deliveries? Or more flavors?

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Nice writing! Enjoy your tea :-)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 22, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

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I usually drink more than three cups of tea every day, because I really like tea.


I uUsually, I drink more than three cups of tea every day, because I really like itea.

Since you have already mentioned tea, you can use "it" instead of repeating tea

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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One day, my friend recommended me to use the tea delivery service.


One day, my friend recommended me to use thea tea delivery service to me.

One day, my friend recommended me to use thea tea delivery service to me.

One day, my friend recommended me tothat I use the tea delivery service.

One day, my friend recommended me to use theis tea deliverysubscription service.

If I am understanding your sentences correctly, what you are describing sounds more like a "subscription service" rather than a "delivery service."

It delivers more than 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but also oorong tea and green tea are possible to use.


It deliversThey will send you more than 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but also oorong tea and green tea are possible to use.

It delivers more thanover 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but also oorlong tea and green (tea are possible to use).

It deliversThey send more than 20 tea bags a month, and not only black te,a but alsoa, they can also deliver to you oorong tea and green tea are possible to use.

It delivers more than 20 tea bags a month, and not on - mostly black te,a, but also ooroolong tea and green tea are also possible to use.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite tea and new kind of tea.


With this service, I can enjoy my favorite tea and try new kind of teas.

With this service, I can enjoy my favourite tea and new kinds of tea.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite tea ands well as new kinds of tea.

With this service, I can enjoy my favorite teas and try new kinds of teas.

I hope there will be other tea delivery service to enjoy other ones.


I hope there will be othermore tea delivery services to enjoy other oneseven more tea.

This is written that you want more companies that do this, but maybe you mean you want more deliveries? Or more flavors?

I hope there will be othermore tea delivery service to enjoy other ones.

Do you mean you want more services like this? (I have corrected it as if you do)

I hope there will bare other tea delivery service tos so that I can enjoy other ones as well.

I hope there will bare other tea deliverysubscription services to enjoy other oneshat I can enjoy.

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