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Sumomo

March 16, 2021

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Tea Ceremony Lessons

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons from 10 April.
In these lessons, I can learn how to serve tea or history of the tea ceremony.
In addition, I'll join casual and formal tea ceremony parties.

When I take a lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.
I bought matcha yesterday.
I wonder what sort of sweets is suitable for the first lesson.
The lesson will be held at the end of cherry blossom season.
So, sweets which is named willow or haze might be good.
I can't wait for the lesson.


4月10日から茶道のオンライン講座を受けます。
抹茶の点て方や、茶道の歴史について学びます。
お茶会やお茶事も体験します。

お稽古のときの、お菓子と抹茶は自分で用意します。
昨日は抹茶を注文しました。
お菓子は、どんなのにしましょうか。
桜も終わりの頃なので、柳や霞が名前に入ったお菓子がいいかもしれません。
講座を受けるのが、待ち遠しいです。

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Tea Ceremony Lessons

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons fromstarting 10 April.

or

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons beginning 10 April.
(US alternative) I'm taking online tea ceremony lessons beginning on April 10.
(US alternative) I'm taking online tea ceremony lessons starting on April 10.
(US alternative) I'll be taking online tea ceremony lessons beginning on April 10.
(US alternative) I'll be taking online tea ceremony lessons starting on April 10.
(US alternative) Starting April 10, I'll be taking online tea ceremony lessons.

In these lessons, I can'll learn how to serve tea orand learn about the history of the tea ceremony.

US alternative

In addition, I'll join casual and formal tea ceremony parties.

When I take aBefore every lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.

US alternative

Before each lesson, I have to prepare sweets and matcha.

I bought matcha yesterday.

I wonder what sort of sweets is suitable for the first lesson.

US alternative

I wonder what kind of sweets is appropriate for the first lesson.

The lesson will be held at the end of cherry blossom season.

So, sweets which is named willow or haze might be good.

US alternative

I can't wait for the lesson.

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すごくて、楽しそうです!

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Sumomo

March 16, 2021

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いつもありがとうございます:-)
きっと楽しい講座だと思います!

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mari

March 16, 2021

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そうですね。楽しんでください!

Tea Ceremony Lessons

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons fromstarting on 10 April.

In these lessons, I can'll learn how to serve tea oras well as the history of the tea ceremonyies.

In addition, I'll join casual and formal tea ceremony parties.

When I take a lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.

I bought matcha yesterday.

I wonder what sort of sweets isare suitable for the first lesson.

The lesson will be held at the end of cherry blossom season.

So, a sweets which is named w"Willow" or h"Haze" might be good.

I can't wait for the lesson.

Feedback

Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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Sumomo

March 16, 2021

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Thank you for your corrections !

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons starting from 10 April.

In these lessons, I can learn how to serve tea orand the history of the tea ceremony.

I corrected "or" to "and", because I thought you would learn both of these things in a class, but if you meant that you can only learn one, either how to serve tea, or the history of the tea ceremony, then you can ignore that part of the correction.

In addition, I'll join casual and formal tea ceremony parties.

When I take a lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.

I wonder what sort of sweets is suitable for the first lesson.

The lesson will be held at the end of cherry blossom season.

So, sweets which is named willow or haze might be good.

I can't wait for the lesson.

Feedback

Wow, everything is online now due to COVID huh. I hope you enjoy it!

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Sumomo

March 16, 2021

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Thank you for your corrections!
Fortunately, I’ll take three lessons face-to-face.
That’ll be good to me.

Tea Ceremony Lessons


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I'll take online tea ceremony lessons from 10 April.


I'll take online tea ceremony lessons starting from 10 April.

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons fromstarting on 10 April.

I'll take online tea ceremony lessons fromstarting 10 April.

or I'll take online tea ceremony lessons beginning 10 April. (US alternative) I'm taking online tea ceremony lessons beginning on April 10. (US alternative) I'm taking online tea ceremony lessons starting on April 10. (US alternative) I'll be taking online tea ceremony lessons beginning on April 10. (US alternative) I'll be taking online tea ceremony lessons starting on April 10. (US alternative) Starting April 10, I'll be taking online tea ceremony lessons.

In these lessons, I can learn how to serve tea or history of the tea ceremony.


In these lessons, I can learn how to serve tea orand the history of the tea ceremony.

I corrected "or" to "and", because I thought you would learn both of these things in a class, but if you meant that you can only learn one, either how to serve tea, or the history of the tea ceremony, then you can ignore that part of the correction.

In these lessons, I can'll learn how to serve tea oras well as the history of the tea ceremonyies.

In these lessons, I can'll learn how to serve tea orand learn about the history of the tea ceremony.

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In addition, I'll join casual and formal tea ceremony parties.


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When I take a lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.


When I take a lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.

When I take a lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.

When I take aBefore every lesson, I have to prepare for a sweets and matcha.

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I bought matcha yesterday.


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I wonder what sort of sweets is suitable for the first lesson.


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I wonder what sort of sweets isare suitable for the first lesson.

I wonder what sort of sweets is suitable for the first lesson.

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The lesson will be held at the end of cherry blossom season.


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So, sweets which is named willow or haze might be good.


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So, a sweets which is named w"Willow" or h"Haze" might be good.

So, sweets which is named willow or haze might be good.

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I can't wait for the lesson.


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