March 10, 2026
Some people think
Some people think society could benefit more if more people study business than history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I do not fully agree with this statement. First of all, we should know for certain what does it mean by the word "benefit". From my point of view, society would definitely win if people became much more kind, caring, responsible and sensible. But that's not what is needed for the world's economy, that's why we're discussing the topic about the importance of studying business. Long story short – if you want to be a good person, pay more attention to study history. If you want to be a successful one, try to study business.
Some people think society could benefit more if more people study business than history.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I do non’t fully agree with this statement.
If you say “do not” it doesn't sound natural so its better it use “don’t”
First of all, we should know for certain what does it mean by the word "benefit".
From my point of view, society would definitely win if people became much more kind, caring, responsible and sensible.
But that's not what is needed for the world's economy, that's why we're discussing the topic about the importance of studying business.
Long story short – if you want to be a good person, pay more attention to study history.
If you want to be a successful one, try to study business.
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This short paragraph about the importance of studying in history and business is grammatically good but the overall construction doesn’t make sense especially in the line of “ But that's not what is needed for the world's economy, that's why we're discussing the topic about the importance of studying business.” It’s a bit off topic and kind of ruins the flow of the paragraph but if you can improve the overall structure of the paragraph I think this paragraph would be perfect.
Some people think
You could capitalise this, as it is a title: Some People Think...
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To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I do not fully agree with this statement.
First of all, we should know for certain what does itis meant by the word "benefit".
From my point of view, society would definitely win if people became much more kind, caring, responsible and sensible.
But that's not what is needed for the world's economy, that's why we're discussing the topic aboutof the importance of studying business.
Long story short – if you want to be a good person, pay more attention to studying history.
If you want to be a successful one, try to study business.
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I totally agree :) Great writing!
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