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My Dream

I was waiting in line for being photographed, there were kpop idols at my side. Once it was my turn, I posed. The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body for the body of a fish. There was Jim Kwik behind the camerawoman, so before leaving I said to him "Hello! I like your book."

After that, I walked to the amusement park. There was giant games. I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to scape. In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catched me down.

Then, I played another game. It consisted of coconuts that you have to kick without falling.

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My Dream

Once it was my turn, I posed.

I like your book.

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After that, I walked to the amusement park.

Then, I played another game.

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My Dream

Once it was my turn, I posed.

Then, I played another game.

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My Dream


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I was waiting in line for being photographed, there were kpop idols at my side.


I was waiting in line for beingto be photographed, there were kpop idols at my side. I was waiting in line to be photographed, there were kpop idols at my side.

I was waiting in line for beingto be photographed, there were kpop idols at my side. I was waiting in line to be photographed, there were kpop idols at my side.

I was waiting in line for beingto be photographed, and there were kpop idols at my side. I was waiting in line to be photographed and there were kpop idols at my side.

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Once it was my turn, I posed.


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The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body for the body of a fish.


The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body for the bodyto look like that of a fish. The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body to look like that of a fish.

Sophisticated!

The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body forinto the body of a fish. The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body into the body of a fish.

There was Jim Kwik behind the camerawoman, so before leaving I said to him "Hello!


There was Jim Kwik behind the camerawoman, so before leaving I said to him "Hello!” to him. There was Jim Kwik behind the camerawoman, so before leaving I said "Hello!” to him.

There was Jim Kwik was behind the camerawoman, so, before I leavingft, I said to him, "Hello! Jim Kwik was behind the camerawoman so, before I left, I said to him, "Hello!

I like your book.


I like your book. I like your book.

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After that, I walked to the amusement park.


After that, I walked to thean amusement park. After that, I walked to an amusement park.

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There was giant games.


There wasere giant games. There were giant games.

There wasere giant games. There were giant games.

There wasere giant games. There were giant games.

I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to scape.


I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape. I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape.

I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape. I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape.

I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape. I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape.

In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catched me down.


In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catchhased me down. In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie chased me down.

caught me also works, it depends whether you mean the zombie was chasing you or did catch you. Caught means did catch

In order to do that, I climbed these/some giant stairs, but a zombie catchhased me down. In order to do that, I climbed these/some giant stairs, but a zombie chased me down.

Depending on the context, you can use some (colloquial).

In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catchhased me down. In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie chased me down.

Then, I played another game.


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It consisted of coconuts that you have to kick without falling.


It consisted of coconuts that you haved to kick without falling down. It consisted of coconuts that you had to kick without falling down.

Had because it is past tense! Adding the down creates more coherency. We only don’t have it when it’s urgent e.g. imperative voice: “It fell down.” “It’s going to fall (down)!” “Be careful, or it’ll fall (down)!”

It consisted of coconuts that you haved to kick without falling. It consisted of coconuts that you had to kick without falling.

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