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My wife's parents secret
Me and my wife moved in together.
As we packed our things, my wife found a documantation.
It was her birth certification.
She noticed her last name has been repaired.
On the paper was'nt her right last name.
She tought it could be a mistake, but she moved foward.
Her mother died for 4 years ago, so she could not asked her about it.
She asked to her mother cousin about the repaired last name.
She told her to it is her mother first husband's last name, so this informnation means that my wife father is not her biology father.
My wife's parents' secret
My wife and my wifeI moved in together.
"Me and X" -> "X and I" is one of those things that is almost a stereotype for English teachers to correct, and a lot of native English speakers will totally say "Me and X" too. I'm normally a bit more on the descriptivist side, where "Me and X" would be ok since so many native speakers use it, but since this is a language learning site I thought I'd let you know that it's formally considered incorrect.
As we packed our things, my wife found (a documaent / some documentation).
"documentation" is uncountable but treated as plural. "document" is the countable equivalent.
It was her birth certificatione.
"certificate" - the record that says something
"certification" - the process of creating a certificate or verifying something officially
She noticed her last name has been repaialtered.
"repaired" = "to take something damaged and make it good again"
OThe name on the paper was'n't her righcorrect last name.
Alternatively "It wasn't her correct last name on the paper"
She thought it could be a mistake, but she moved forward.
Her mother died for 4 years ago, so she could not asked her about it.
She asked to her mother's cousin about the repairchanged last name.
She told her tohat it is her mother's first husband's last name, so this informnation means that my wife father is not her biologyical father.
"biology" as a an adjective is only used when describing things directly related to the study of biology, e.g. biology degree, biology classroom, biology teacher. In every other case the adjective used is biological.
My wife's pParents s' Secret
My wife and my wifeI moved in together.
As we packed our things, my wife found a documaentation.
It was her birth certificatione.
She noticed her last name hasd been repaired.
I'm not sure about "repaired" here. Maybe "corrected" or "changed" would work better. We repair something that is broken.
On the paper was'nt her right last name.Her last name on the paper wasn't correct. ¶
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This might also work: "The paper didn't have her correct last name."
She thought it could be a mistake, but she moved forward.
I'm not sure what you mean by "moved forward." She accepted it? She didn't question it?
Her mother died for 4 years ago, so she could not asked her about it.
She asked to her mother's cousin about the [repaired] last name.
SheHer cousin told her tohat it iwas her mother's first husband's last name, so this informnation means that my wife's father is not her biologyical father.
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You were able to tell the story despite minor errors. Good work!
My wife's parents' secret
My wife and my wifeI moved in together.
As we packed our things, my wife found a documaentation.
It was her birth certification.e
She noticed her last name hasd been repairchanged.
On the paper was'n't her right last name.
She thought it could be a mistake, but she moved forward.
Her mother died for 4 years ago, so she could not asked her about it.
She asked to her mother's cousin about the repairchanged last name.
She told her to it is her mother's first husband's last name, so this informnation means that my wife's father is not her biologyical father.
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I could understand it overall, but it had some minor errors. Very interesting post though!
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Me and my wife moved in together. My wife and My wife and My wife and "Me and X" -> "X and I" is one of those things that is almost a stereotype for English teachers to correct, and a lot of native English speakers will totally say "Me and X" too. I'm normally a bit more on the descriptivist side, where "Me and X" would be ok since so many native speakers use it, but since this is a language learning site I thought I'd let you know that it's formally considered incorrect. |
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She noticed her last name has been repaired. She noticed her last name ha She noticed her last name ha I'm not sure about "repaired" here. Maybe "corrected" or "changed" would work better. We repair something that is broken. She noticed her last name has been "repaired" = "to take something damaged and make it good again" |
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On the paper was'nt her right last name. On the paper was
This might also work: "The paper didn't have her correct last name."
Alternatively "It wasn't her correct last name on the paper" |
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She tought it could be a mistake, but she moved foward. She thought it could be a mistake, but she moved forward. She thought it could be a mistake, but she moved forward. I'm not sure what you mean by "moved forward." She accepted it? She didn't question it? She thought it could be a mistake, but she moved forward. |
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She told her to it is her mother first husband's last name, so this informnation means that my wife father is not her biology father. She told her
She told her t "biology" as a an adjective is only used when describing things directly related to the study of biology, e.g. biology degree, biology classroom, biology teacher. In every other case the adjective used is biological. |
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