The Movie,: Dune The Movie: Dune

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Last week, I saw a movie called "Dune". Last week, I saw a movie called "Dune".

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Its story is based on the "Dune" novel, especially athe first half part of the book No. Its story is based on the "Dune" novel, especially the first half of the book.

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The story is about a conflict between noble houses and the emperor. The story is about a conflict between noble houses and the emperor.

The main character runs away by betraying, and hideing with his mother in the desert. The main character runs away by betraying, and hiding with his mother in the desert.

betraying whom?

During this trip, many people helps them to escape. During this trip, many people help them escape.

The main character gets through alover all of his internal fear and pain of his inside. The main character gets over all of his internal fear and pain.

"of is inside" is not correct, use the word "internal" to describe his fear and pain.

When he finally overcomes them, Hhe starts to realize that he is a Messiah. When he finally overcomes them, he starts to realize that he is a Messiah.

lowercase for pronouns such as "he"

The movie ends at this paroint, so it is a little weird if you don’t know the full story. The movie ends at this point, so it is a little weird if you don’t know the full story.

AlternativelyOn the other hand, I am sovery impressed with the beautiful scenes and graphicspecial effects. On the other hand, I am very impressed with the beautiful scenes and special effects.

I know what you mean by "graphics" but we use graphics when talking about video games for instance, not movies. Movies use the term "special effects"

BThe ackground music, which is composed by Hans Zimmer who is (one of my favorite composers), is also great. The ackground music, which is composed by Hans Zimmer (one of my favorite composers), is also great.