Feb. 3, 2025
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When we are young, the day without any plan is so boring but when we get old, it is inversed.
We felt at ease when our schedule has a hole and we hope that increases.
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder where comes from that physical force.
若いころは、何も予定がない日は退屈きわまりないものだが、年をとるとそれが逆に
なる。手帳に空白の欄があるとほっとし、もっと増えてほしいと願ってしまう。60 歳を
過ぎてもなお多忙な日程をこなしている人たちがいるが、あの活力はいったいどこから
くるのだろう。
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Extract from DAPF Level 1
When we are young, thea day without any plan is so boring but when we get old, it is inversedthe opposite.
When we are young, a day without any plan is so boring but when we get old, it is the opposite.
We felt at ease when our schedule has a hole and we hope that increases. We felt at ease when our schedule has a hole and we hope that increases.
What do you mean by hole? I don't understand
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder where comes from that physical forcey they still have that much strength.
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder why they still have that much strength.
When they were much younger, they had a healthy lifestyle.
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Extract from DAPF Level 1
When we are young, thea day without any plan is so boring b. But when we get old, ithat is inreversed.
When we are young, a day without any plan is so boring. But when we get old, that is reversed.
We felt at easeAs we get older, we feel better when our schedule has a holefrees up, and we hope that increasesere's more and more free time.
As we get older, we feel better when our schedule frees up, and we hope there's more and more free time.
"Frees up" in this context may be a better choice than "has a hole in it" as that phrase often means a literal, physical hole.
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder where comes from that physical forcethat energy comes from.
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder where that energy comes from.
We often refer to it as "energy" instead of force.
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I'm amazed by the elderly that keep active. But its usually because they never stopped being active!
Feb. 4, 2025
rcstat , thank you for corrections! I think so too! This text is the extraction from the writing test:)
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When we are young, the day without any plan is so boring but when we get old, it is inversed.
When we are young,
When we are young, |
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We felt at ease when our schedule has a hole and we hope that increases.
"Frees up" in this context may be a better choice than "has a hole in it" as that phrase often means a literal, physical hole. We felt at ease when our schedule has a hole and we hope that increases. We felt at ease when our schedule has a hole and we hope that increases. What do you mean by hole? I don't understand |
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Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder where comes from that physical force.
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder where We often refer to it as "energy" instead of force.
Some people after 60 years old are still very active but I wonder wh When they were much younger, they had a healthy lifestyle. |
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