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alexwong2164

Nov. 12, 2020

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Taxi or Bicycle

Last two months I was riding a bicycle to my work place.

That takes about half hour.

If in terms exercise that is quite good to do 6 days a week.

But in terms of before you go to your office that isn’t a nice experience.

Because when I arrive my office my whole body was soaking wet.

In last few days the infected number suddenly got up.

Our company allow us using taxi to go to work.

That is fast, comfortable but expensive.

Sure, I am happy about this policy.

But to see more people getting infected by the virus is just sad.

I hope you well.

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LIn the last two months I washave been riding a bicycle to my work place, which...

That ...takes about half an hour.

If in terms exercise that is quite good to doFrom an exercise point of view, It is great to ride a bicycle 6 days a week.

But in terms of before you go to your office thafrom a practical point of view, it isn’ not a nicegood experience, because ...

Because... when I arrive my officeat work, my whole body wais soaking wet from perspiration.

In last few days, the infected number suddenly got up.number of virus infections has suddenly increased.

Our company allows us using taxi to goto take a taxi to work.

You should explain the correlation between taking a taxi to work and the virus infection.

That is fast,axis are more comfortable but expensive.

Sure, I am happy about this policy, but I'm sad at the same .....

But... to see more people getting infected by the virus is just sad.

I hope you are well.

Or you can say "I wish you well."

Taxi or Bicycle?

LFor the last two months I washave been riding a bicycle to my work place.

ThaIt takes about a half hour.

If in terms of exercise that i, it's quite good to dodoing it 6 days a week.

But in terms of before you go to your office tha, it isn’t a nice experience.

Because when I arrive my office, my whole body wais soaking wet.

In the last few days, the infected numbernumber of infections suddenly gowent up.

Our company allows us usingto use a taxi to go to work.

That iIt's fast, and comfortable, but expensive.

Sure, I am happy about this policy.

But to see more people getting infected by the virus is just sad.

I hope you are well.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

Taxi or Bicycle

LFor the last two months I washave been riding a bicycle to my work place.

A more natural way to say this would be: "for the last two months I have been biking to work"

That takes about half an hour.

If in terms of exercise that is quite good to do 6 days a week.

But in terms of before you go to your office that isn’t a nice experience.

Because when I arrive at my office my whole body wais soaking wet.

Changed was -> is to match tense

If you want it to be past tense I would say

Because by the time I arrived at the office, my whole body would be soaking wet.

In last few days the infected numbernumber of infections has suddenly got uprisen.

Our company is allowing us usingto use taxis to go to work.

That isey are fast, and comfortable but expensive.

Sure, I am happy about this policy.

But to see more people getting infected by the virus is just sad.

I hope you are well.

Feedback

Keep up the good work!

Taxi or Bicycle


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Taxi or Bicycle?

Last two months I was riding a bicycle to my work place.


LFor the last two months I washave been riding a bicycle to my work place.

A more natural way to say this would be: "for the last two months I have been biking to work"

LFor the last two months I washave been riding a bicycle to my work place.

LIn the last two months I washave been riding a bicycle to my work place, which...

That takes about half hour.


That takes about half an hour.

ThaIt takes about a half hour.

That ...takes about half an hour.

If in terms exercise that is quite good to do 6 days a week.


If in terms of exercise that is quite good to do 6 days a week.

If in terms of exercise that i, it's quite good to dodoing it 6 days a week.

If in terms exercise that is quite good to doFrom an exercise point of view, It is great to ride a bicycle 6 days a week.

But in terms of before you go to your office that isn’t a nice experience.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But in terms of before you go to your office tha, it isn’t a nice experience.

But in terms of before you go to your office thafrom a practical point of view, it isn’ not a nicegood experience, because ...

Because when I arrive my office my whole body was soaking wet.


Because when I arrive at my office my whole body wais soaking wet.

Changed was -> is to match tense If you want it to be past tense I would say Because by the time I arrived at the office, my whole body would be soaking wet.

Because when I arrive my office, my whole body wais soaking wet.

Because... when I arrive my officeat work, my whole body wais soaking wet from perspiration.

In last few days the infected number suddenly got up.


In last few days the infected numbernumber of infections has suddenly got uprisen.

In the last few days, the infected numbernumber of infections suddenly gowent up.

In last few days, the infected number suddenly got up.number of virus infections has suddenly increased.

Our company allow us using taxi to go to work.


Our company is allowing us usingto use taxis to go to work.

Our company allows us usingto use a taxi to go to work.

Our company allows us using taxi to goto take a taxi to work.

You should explain the correlation between taking a taxi to work and the virus infection.

That is fast, comfortable but expensive.


That isey are fast, and comfortable but expensive.

That iIt's fast, and comfortable, but expensive.

That is fast,axis are more comfortable but expensive.

Sure, I am happy about this policy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sure, I am happy about this policy, but I'm sad at the same .....

But to see more people getting infected by the virus is just sad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But... to see more people getting infected by the virus is just sad.

I hope you well.


I hope you are well.

I hope you are well.

I hope you are well.

Or you can say "I wish you well."

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