May 30, 2025
Today I woke up at 9:30 am, I washed my face and brushed my teeth, then, I ate some fruits like mango, papaya and banana.
After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver', it was interpretated by Robert De Niro, I loved this movie because I am throuing a similar situation with my exgirlfriend.
I think it is a work of art and everyone must to see it almost once time in their lifes.
Now, I want to see the second season of 'The Last Of Us'.
Today I woke up at 9:30 am, I washed my face and, brushed my teeth, then, I ate some fruits like mango, papaya and banana.
Sounds more natural
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If you just meant 'girlfriend', then you can say ''I'm going through"
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Now, I want to seewatch the second season of 'The Last Oof Us'.
''Now, I want to see the second season of 'The Last Of Us'.'' This whole sentence is completely fine if, for example, you've just finished the first season of 'The Last of Us' and you're talking to somebody about your experience watching the first season. You might then say ''Now, I want to see the second season''. However if the person doesn't know that I've just finished the first season of The Last of Us, they might assume I mean 'go to the movies to watch the second season' or something similar - that's also a very common usage of the word 'see' (ex. I was planning to go see that new Spiderman movie with Richard, but he cancelled on me last minute). Also 'of' in titles generally isn't capitalized.
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Good job!
I added the movie to my to-watch list :D
After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver', it was interpretated byfeatured Robert De Niro,. I loved this movie because I am going throuingh a similar situation with my ex-girlfriend.
Small vocabulary corrections. Nice job :)
I think it is a work of art and everyone must to see it almost once time in their lifves.
lifes is not a word in english, it should be lives
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Great job, only minor mistakes. Your writing was easy to understand and concise.
Today I woke up at 9:30 am, I washed my face and, brushed my teeth, and then, I ate some fruits like mangoes, papayas and bananas.
You only have to use I once in a series of actions linked in a single sentence.
After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver',." it was interpretated by Robert De Niro, I loved this movie because I am going throuingh a similar situation with my ex girlfriend.
I think ithis movie is a work of art and everyone must to see it almoshould watch it at least once time in their lifves.
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Now, I want to see the second season of 'The Last Of Us'. Now, I want to ''Now, I want to see the second season of 'The Last Of Us'.'' This whole sentence is completely fine if, for example, you've just finished the first season of 'The Last of Us' and you're talking to somebody about your experience watching the first season. You might then say ''Now, I want to see the second season''. However if the person doesn't know that I've just finished the first season of The Last of Us, they might assume I mean 'go to the movies to watch the second season' or something similar - that's also a very common usage of the word 'see' (ex. I was planning to go see that new Spiderman movie with Richard, but he cancelled on me last minute). Also 'of' in titles generally isn't capitalized. |
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