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Tax on the wealthies

The wealthies pay little or no tax as they register assets such as car, house and other luxuries within company that they own. They hide these under cover of company's assets. There are multiple ways the wealties use in order to avoid to pay taxes. While only the poors and middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealties are finding ways to make money from money. Here's the thing, goverments turns a blind eye to this situation.

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Tax on the wWealthiesy

The wealthiesy pay little or no tax as they register assets such as cars, houses, and other luxuries within company that they own.

They hide these under the cover of the company's assets.

There are multiple ways for the wealties use in orderhy to avoid to paying taxes.

While only the poors and middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealtieshy are finding ways to make money from money.

Here's the thing, governments turns a blind eye to this situation.

Tax on the wealthiesy

The wealthiesy pay little tor no tax as they register assets such as a car, house and other luxuries within company that they own.

They hide these under the cover of company's assets.

There are multiple waymethods the wealtieshy use in order to avoid to pay taxes.

You use a "tool" or a "method", not a "way".

While only the poors and the middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealtieshy are finding ways to make even more money from money.

"Poors" is a bit of an insult. Kind of like saying "peasant". It's kind of archaic as well. Saying "the poor" or "poor people" is much better.

Here's the thing, governments turns a blind eye to this situation.

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Tax on the wealthiesy

This is a difficult grammar point for me to explain, but you see this in phrases like "the poor", " the wealthy", "the elderly". It's a noun, but you use the adjective form, not the plural form.

The wealthiesy pay little or no tax as they register assets such as cars, houses and other luxuries within a company that they own.

They hide these under (the) cover of company's assets.

There are multiple ways the wealties use in order tohy avoid to paying taxes.

Or: There are multiple methods the wealthy use to avoid paying taxes.
It sounds a bit strange to say that you "use" a way.

While only the poors and middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealtieshy are finding ways to make money from money.

Here's the thing, goverments turns a blind eye to this situation.

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Great work!

Tax on the wealthies


Tax on the wealthiesy

This is a difficult grammar point for me to explain, but you see this in phrases like "the poor", " the wealthy", "the elderly". It's a noun, but you use the adjective form, not the plural form.

Tax on the wealthiesy

Tax on the wWealthiesy

The wealthies pay little or no tax as they register assets such as car, house and other luxuries within company that they own.


The wealthiesy pay little or no tax as they register assets such as cars, houses and other luxuries within a company that they own.

The wealthiesy pay little tor no tax as they register assets such as a car, house and other luxuries within company that they own.

The wealthiesy pay little or no tax as they register assets such as cars, houses, and other luxuries within company that they own.

They hide these under cover of company's assets.


They hide these under (the) cover of company's assets.

They hide these under the cover of company's assets.

They hide these under the cover of the company's assets.

There are multiple ways the wealties use in order to avoid to pay taxes.


There are multiple ways the wealties use in order tohy avoid to paying taxes.

Or: There are multiple methods the wealthy use to avoid paying taxes. It sounds a bit strange to say that you "use" a way.

There are multiple waymethods the wealtieshy use in order to avoid to pay taxes.

You use a "tool" or a "method", not a "way".

There are multiple ways for the wealties use in orderhy to avoid to paying taxes.

While only the poors and middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealties are finding ways to make money from money.


While only the poors and middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealtieshy are finding ways to make money from money.

While only the poors and the middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealtieshy are finding ways to make even more money from money.

"Poors" is a bit of an insult. Kind of like saying "peasant". It's kind of archaic as well. Saying "the poor" or "poor people" is much better.

While only the poors and middle class cover the cost of public services, the wealtieshy are finding ways to make money from money.

Here's the thing, goverments turns a blind eye to this situation.


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Here's the thing, governments turns a blind eye to this situation.

Here's the thing, governments turns a blind eye to this situation.

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