tasks on Sentences to describinge people

Joan is an interesting person due toas she has livinged in exotic places, and as a result she has had so many strainterestinge experience s.¶
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He has a habit of speaking with his mouth full, which I find to be disgusting ¶
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Owing to the fact that David never pays for anything, he gives the impression of him being mean stingy.¶
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Since my sister often forgets where she puts things, she appears to be absent-minded ¶
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Having been cCovered in dust, Oliver climbed down the ladder ¶
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HavBeing beenextremely tired out, Veronica couldn't go on withcontinue the journey ¶
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BeingAs he is so rude, Richard has no friends ¶
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Having been laughinged hysterically, Susan couldn't speak ¶
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Having been walkinged on crutches, Paul left the room slowly ¶
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Being so patient, Louise is cut out to be a teacher ¶
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Being vain, Cathy spends hours doing her make-up, furthermorein fact, she is always looking at herself in the mirror.

In addition to that, Gordon shouts at people a lot, h. He also clenches his fists whenever he gets angry, so he strikes one as being aggressive.

Paula gives the impression of being insincere, as she flatters people she dislikes as well asnd pretends to agree with them, even she's of has a different opinion.

As far as I'm concerned, Roberts tends to tap her foot if she has to wait, moreover, she sighs if things don't happen quickly; it seems to me that she appears to be impatient

Since Paul is honest, people trust him ¶
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Joan is an interesting person due to living in exotic places, as a result; she has had so many strange experience ¶
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The use of "due to" and "as a result" in the same sentence is redundant.

Alternative:
"Joan is an interesting person due to living in exotic places and having had so many strange experiences"

I dislike her due to the fact that she is vain and self-centered ¶
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He has a habit of speaking with his mouth full, which I find to be disgusting ¶
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Sarah strikes people as being immature, since tshey often giggles when someone speaks to her ¶
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Owing to the fact that David never pays for anything, it gives the impression of him being mean ¶
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Is "mean" the correct word choice?

Maybe "frugal", "tight", "freeloader", "ignorant" depending on what you're trying to communicate.

In my opinion, as he doesn't return things which he's borrowed, he seems to be dishonest ¶
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Since my sister often forgets where she puts things, she appears to be absent-minded ¶
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Having been tirwiped out, Veronica couldn't go on with the journey ¶
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"tired out" isn't a natural expression.

I'm not sure on the best alternative since there isn't much context. "Wiped out" is maybe the nearest thing:
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/wiped-out

Being so intelligent, she can speak six languages ¶
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The grammar is fine but this doesn't read as a natural sentence as "being intelligent" doesn't naturally mean someone can speak six languages.

Native example:
"She can speak six languages - she's so intelligent!"

Having beento walking on crutches, Paul left the room slowly ¶
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Being so patient Louise, is cut out to be a teacher ¶
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In addition to the fact that Gordon shouts at people a lot, he also clenches his fists whenever he gets angry, so he strikecomes across as as being aggressive.

"strikes" is not an appropriate word in this context.

Alternative suggiestion:
"he gives the impression of being aggressive"

Paula gives the impression of being insincere, as she flatters people she dislikes, as well as pretends to agree with them, even if she' is of a different opinion.

As far as I'm concerned Robertsa tends to tap her foot if she has to wait, moreover, she sighs if things don't happen quickly; it seems to me that she appears to beis impatient

"Roberts" is not a first name (it is a surname).
"Robert" is a male first name.
"Roberta" is a female first name.


"As far as I'm concerned" doesn't fit with this sentence.

Since Paul is honest, people trust him ¶
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The reason he is successful is thatbecause he works extremely hard ¶
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Joan is an interesting person due tobecause she has livinged in exotic places, as a result shend has had so many strange experience s¶
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I dislike her due to the fact thatbecause she is vain and self-centered ¶
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He has a habit of speaking with his mouth full, which I find to be disgusting ¶
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Sarah strikes people as being immature, since tshey often giggles when someone speaks to her ¶
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OwingThe fact that David never pays for anything, gives the impression of him being mean ¶
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Since my sister often forgets where she puts things, she appears to be absent-minded ¶
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In addition to that Gordon shoutsing at people a lot, he also clenches his fists whenever he gets angry, so he strikes me as being aggressive.

As far as I'm concerned Robertsa tends to tap her foot if she has to wait, moreover, she sighs if things don't happen quickly; it seems to me that she appears to be impatient

The reason he is successful is thatbecause he works extremely hard .¶
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Joan is interesting person due tobecause she livinges in exotic places, as a result she has had so many strange experience ¶
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He has a habit of speaking with a full mouth full, which I find to be disgusting ¶
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Sarah strikes people as being immature, since tshey often giggles when someone speaks to her ¶
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OwingThe fact that David never pays for anything, gives the impression of him being mean ¶
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In my opinion, asbecause he doidn't return things which he' has borrowed, he seems to be dishonest ¶
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Since my sister often forgets where she puts things, she appears to be absent-minded ¶
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In addition to the fact that Gordon shouts at people a lot, he also clenches his fists whenever he gets angry, so he strikes people as being aggressive.

Paula gives the impression of being insincere, as she flatters people she dislikes as well as pretends to agree with them, even if she's of a different opinion.