Sept. 2, 2020
Task 1
The first line graph demonstrates the amount of money spent by parents on their children’s sports during 2008 and 2014 in Britain.The other graph represents information about British children going in for sports(football,swimming and ahtlethics) in the same years.
According to the upper graph, British parents spent exactly 20 pounds per month for their children in 2008. During the next six years this number was increasing steadily, before reaching roughly 30 pounds by the year 2014.
The second graph shows that the number of children attending football section remained stable over this period, despite a slight climb to approximately 8 million in 2012.Comparatively, the number of the ones who participated in swimming was rising slightly during the observed years. Eventually, the number of British children participated in athletics went up significantly from 2010 to 2012 and reached a peak of 5 million children.
Overall, we can see that the number of children participated in three different sports experinced a general increase over the six-year period and football was the most popular choice among British children in 2014
The first line graph demonstrates the amount of money spent by parents on their children’s sports during 2008 and 2014 in Britain.The other graph represents information about British children going in for sportssports participation amongst British children (football, swimming and ahtlethics) in the same years.
According to the upper graph, British parents spent exactly 20 pounds per month foron their children in 2008.
During the next six years this number was increasinged steadily, before reaching roughly 30 pounds a month by the year 2014.
The second graph shows that the number of children attendplaying football section remained stable over this period, despite a slight climb to approximately 8 million in 2012. Comparatively, the number of the onesose who participated in swimming was risingrose slightly during the observed years.
Eventually, the number of British children participateding in athletics went up significantly frombetween 2010 toand 2012, and reached a peak of 5 million children.
Overall, we can see that the number of children who participated in three different sports experinced a general increase over the six-year period, and football was the most popular choice among British children in 2014.
Task 1
The first line graph demonstrates the amount of money spent by parents on their children’s sports during 2008 and 2014 in Britain. The other graph represents information about British children going in for who participated in sports (football, swimming and ahthlethics) in those same years.
"going in for sports" is correct grammar, but sounds too casual for writing of this type.
According to the upper graph, British parents spent exactly 20 pounds per month for their children in 2008.
During the next six years this number was increasinged steadily, before reaching roughly 30 pounds per month by the year 2014.
The second graph shows that the number of children attending football section remained stable over this period, despite a slight climb to approximately 8 million in 2012. Comparatively, the number of the ones who participated in swimming was risingrose slightly during the observed years.
Eventually, the number of British children who participated in athletics went up significantly from 2010 to 2012 and reached a peak of 5 million children.
Overall, we can see that the number of children who participated in three different sports experienced a general increase over the six-year period and football was the most popular choice among British children in 2014.
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Sept. 2, 2020
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The first line graph demonstrates the amount of money spent by parents on their children’s sports during 2008 and 2014 in Britain.The other graph represents information about British children going in for sports(football,swimming and ahtlethics) in the same years. The first line graph demonstrates the amount of money spent by parents on their children’s sports during 2008 and 2014 in Britain. The other graph represents information about British children "going in for sports" is correct grammar, but sounds too casual for writing of this type. The first line graph demonstrates the amount of money spent by parents on their children’s sports during 2008 and 2014 in Britain.The other graph represents information about |
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According to the upper graph, British parents spent exactly 20 pounds per month for their children in 2008. This sentence has been marked as perfect! According to the upper graph, British parents spent exactly 20 pounds per month |
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During the next six years this number was increasing steadily, before reaching roughly 30 pounds by the year 2014. During the next six years this number During the next six years this number |
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The second graph shows that the number of children attending football section remained stable over this period, despite a slight climb to approximately 8 million in 2012.Comparatively, the number of the ones who participated in swimming was rising slightly during the observed years. The second graph shows that the number of children attending football section remained stable over this period, despite a slight climb to approximately 8 million in 2012. Comparatively, the number The second graph shows that the number of children |
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Eventually, the number of British children participated in athletics went up significantly from 2010 to 2012 and reached a peak of 5 million children. Eventually, the number of British children who participated in athletics went up significantly from 2010 to 2012 and reached a peak of 5 million children. Eventually, the number of British children participat |
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Overall, we can see that the number of children participated in three different sports experinced a general increase over the six-year period and football was the most popular choice among British children in 2014 Overall, we can see that the number of children who participated in three different sports experienced a general increase over the six-year period and football was the most popular choice among British children in 2014. Overall, we can see that the number of children who participated in three different sports experinced a general increase over the six-year period, and football was the most popular choice among British children in 2014. |
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