Aug. 27, 2025
Tanjiro and Giyu From Demon Slayer
I'm going to write about Tanjiro and Giyu from the anime Demon Slayer.
Tanjiro is the main character from the Demon Slayer.
His mother, sisters, and brothers are killed by man-eating demons.
Only one sister Nezuko is survived.
He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko on his back to see the doctor.
But then, Nezuko suddenly tries to bite him.
She is somehow transformed into a demon.
When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyu shows up and saves him.
This is how Tanjiro meets Giyu.
鬼滅の刃の炭治郎と義勇について書きます。
炭治郎は鬼滅の刃のメインキャラクターです。
彼のお母さんと妹と弟たちは、人食い鬼に殺されてしまいます。
一人の妹ねずこだけ生き残ります。
彼は、パニックになり、でもすぐにねずこを背負い医者にいくために走ります。
でもその時、突然ねずこが彼に嚙みつこうとします。
彼女は、なぜだか鬼に変貌してしまいます。
炭治郎がねずこに襲われている時、義勇が現れて彼を救います。
これが、炭治郎と義勇の出会いです。
Tanjiro and Giyu From Demon Slayer
I'm going to write about Tanjiro and Giyu from the anime Demon Slayer.
Tanjiro is the main character from the Demon Slayer.
His mother, sisters, and brothers are killed by man-eating demons.
Only one sister, Nezuko is, survived.
He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko on his back to see the doctor.
But then, Nezuko suddenly tries to bite him.
She is somehow transformed into a demon.
When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyu shows up and saves him.
This is how Tanjiro meets Giyu.
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Excellently written! Very few mistakes.
Aug. 27, 2025
I think the other commenter over-corrected you. It's very common to describe the plot of a story in the present tense.
Aug. 27, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Aug. 28, 2025
I agree with riddlememiss after sleeping on it. Something I am realizing while learning a new language is how many rules I've forgotten or auto correct in my brain in my native language. No hard feelings I hope. I'll try better in the future.
Tanjiro is the main character from the Demon Slayer.
Only oneHowever, one of his sisters, Nezuko is, survived.
I made it a little more natural sounding, but a minimal change to make it "correct" would be: Only one sister, Nezuko, survived.
He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko at first, but then immediately put her on his back and ran to see the doctor.
I struggled a bit as to whether to change the tense of the overall recap to present tense because you are describing it as it is happening, but past tense works overall if it is consistent. The version I propose here flows a little better with that in mind.
But then, Nezuko suddenly triesd to bite him.
Keeping with the "it is typically more correct to keep one tense" honestly though English is flexible about this in a casual sense and I am probably being pedantic.
She ishad somehow transformed into a demon.
This is a tricky one to describe the edit. In present tense, is technically works here, but it sounds like it just happens right then in that exact moment which isn't the case. Though since I moved everything to past tense, it works itself out. You also could do a heavier edit to say: "It seemed that she had somehow been transformed into a demon." This sounds a bit more natural. To me at least.
When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyua stranger named Giyu suddenly showsed up and savesd him.
The person you are describing this to doesn't have context for who Giyu is so it can be confusing. I wanted to put "a man named..." at first, but then remembered he is like 14 or something and "a teen named..." sounds silly in English even though it is correct grammatically.
This is how Tanjiro meetst Giyu.
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Demon Slayer is a cool anime. I felt a little nitpicky here and honestly, the nuance of proper grammatical tensing is probably above the level of the average native speaker. Meaning, more people probably do it incorrectly anyways and just base it on how it feels when saying it. Writing can be a bit more picky about that sort of thing though. Overall, I didn't have any issues understanding you, and the only actual "errors" were minor, but I wanted to do my best to give a more "advanced" correction.
Aug. 27, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Sounds like you have watched Demon Slayer. I'm happy to hear that.
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Only one sister Nezuko is survived.
I made it a little more natural sounding, but a minimal change to make it "correct" would be: Only one sister, Nezuko, survived. Only one sister, Nezuko |
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He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko on his back to see the doctor. He I struggled a bit as to whether to change the tense of the overall recap to present tense because you are describing it as it is happening, but past tense works overall if it is consistent. The version I propose here flows a little better with that in mind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But then, Nezuko suddenly tries to bite him. But then, Nezuko suddenly trie Keeping with the "it is typically more correct to keep one tense" honestly though English is flexible about this in a casual sense and I am probably being pedantic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She is somehow transformed into a demon. She This is a tricky one to describe the edit. In present tense, is technically works here, but it sounds like it just happens right then in that exact moment which isn't the case. Though since I moved everything to past tense, it works itself out. You also could do a heavier edit to say: "It seemed that she had somehow been transformed into a demon." This sounds a bit more natural. To me at least. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyu shows up and saves him. When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, The person you are describing this to doesn't have context for who Giyu is so it can be confusing. I wanted to put "a man named..." at first, but then remembered he is like 14 or something and "a teen named..." sounds silly in English even though it is correct grammatically. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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