Feb. 22, 2020
Until the twentieth century, sunburnt skin was a sign of poverty, since people with skin like that worked outdoors for a living. Nonetheless, nowadays it has become a sign of wealth. People with higher income can afford to travel more and get a suntan. Tawny skin can also look attractive and healthy. In reality, tan is a response to skin damage, but not a sign of health. Too much exposure to sun rays may be dangerous, or even lethal. But that doesn't mean we have to hide indoors all summer. Just wear lots of sunscreen before sunbathing. And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with one hundred per cent protection from UV radiation.
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In reality, tan is a response to skin damage, butand not a sign of health.
But that doesn't mean we have to hide indoors all summer.
Just wear lots of sunscreen before sunbathing.
And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with one hundred per cent protection from UV radiation.
Combine with the previous sentence.
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Until the twentieth century, sunburnt skin was a sign of poverty, since people with skin like that worked outdoors for a living.
Nonetheless, nowadays it has become a sign of wealth.
People with high income have more possibilities to travel and get a suntan.
Tawny skin can also be looked attractive and healthy.
I didn't know the word tawny before you used it just now. It's correct, and beautiful, but perhaps literary. I would stick with "tan skin" in day-to-day writing.
In reality, tan iss are a response to skin damage of the skin, but, not a sign of health.
Yours is grammatical, but it sounds quite unnatural to me.
Too much exposure of sun rays may be dangerous or, even worse, lethal.
You could also write "... or even worse—lethal."
But this is all style and punctuation, no real problem.
Anyway, that doesn't imply we have to hide indoors all summer.
Just wear lots of sunscreen before sunbathing.
And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with aone hundred per cent protection from UV radiation.
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In Asia, people still value lighter skin. It's really interesting because I find tan skin more attractive.
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People with high income have more possibilities to travel and get a suntan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! People with higher income |
Tawny skin can also be looked attractive and healthy. Tawny skin can also I didn't know the word tawny before you used it just now. It's correct, and beautiful, but perhaps literary. I would stick with "tan skin" in day-to-day writing. |
In reality, tan is a response to damage of the skin, but not a sign of health. In reality, tan Yours is grammatical, but it sounds quite unnatural to me. |
Too much exposure of sun rays may be dangerous or even worse, lethal. Too much exposure of sun rays may be dangerous or, even worse, lethal. You could also write "... or even worse—lethal." But this is all style and punctuation, no real problem. |
Anyway, that doesn't imply we have to hide indoors all summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Just wear lots of sunscreen before sunbathing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with a hundred per cent protection from UV radiation. And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with |
Tawny skin can also look attractive and healthy. Ta Ta |
In reality, tan are a response to skin damage, but not a sign of health.
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Too much exposure of sun rays may be dangerous or even worse, lethal. Too much exposure to |
And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with one hundred per cent protection from UV radiation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! And keep in mind to wear sunglasses with one hundred per cent protection from UV radiation. Combine with the previous sentence. |
People with higher income can afford to travel more and get a suntan. |
In reality, tan is a response to skin damage, but not a sign of health. In reality, tan is a response to skin damage, |
Too much exposure to sun rays may be dangerous, or even lethal. |
But that doesn't mean we have to hide indoors all summer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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