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SummerTeaWater

April 27, 2022

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Talking With My Senior

I asked some questions to my senior who is a board member of the SW develop team.

The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures that I really want to become.

He said that a SW architecture don't bother difficult issues, and he should give a result with nice negotiations.

Besides, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.

His advices were not easy to do, but I thought that I could get many skills while doing them.

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Talking With My Senior

I asked some questions to my senior who is a board member of the SW develop team.

The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures, which is twhat I really want to become.

He said that a SW architecture doesn't bother with difficult issues, and. Instead, he should give a result with nice negotiations.

Besides that, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.

His advices wereas not easy to dofollow, but I thought that I could getain many skills while doing them.

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Great job! :)

Talking With My Senior

I asked some questions to my senior who is a board member of the SW develop team.

The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures thatbecause I really want to become one.

He said that an SW architecture doesn't bother with difficult issues, and he should give a results with nice negotiations.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say in the last part of the sentence

Besides, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.

His advices wereas not easy to dofollow, but I thought that I could get many skills while doing themfollowing it.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say in the last sentences

Feedback

Good writing! :)

Talking With My Senior


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I asked some questions to my senior who is a board member of the SW develop team.


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The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures that I really want to become.


The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures thatbecause I really want to become one.

The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures, which is twhat I really want to become.

He said that a SW architecture don't bother difficult issues, and he should give a result with nice negotiations.


He said that an SW architecture doesn't bother with difficult issues, and he should give a results with nice negotiations.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say in the last part of the sentence

He said that a SW architecture doesn't bother with difficult issues, and. Instead, he should give a result with nice negotiations.

Besides, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Besides that, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.

His advices were not easy to do, but I thought that I could get many skills while doing them.


His advices wereas not easy to dofollow, but I thought that I could get many skills while doing themfollowing it.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say in the last sentences

His advices wereas not easy to dofollow, but I thought that I could getain many skills while doing them.

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