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TakagauchiEiji

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talking about what happened the other day (casually)

The other day, there was a music event called "YouTube Music Weekend," and my favorite band, ずっと真夜中でいいのに (Zutomayo), performed. I initially thought it would be a short show—maybe 15 to 30 minutes—since that's how long the other artists' videos were. But to my surprise, it went on until 11:30! I was thrilled.
At first, I was fully immersed, watching in full screen for the first 30 minutes. But after that, since I expected it to end soon, I started to get curious and opened the chat. Suddenly, Zutomayo herself appeared, interacting with the audience, sharing fun facts about the live performance. It was such a fun experience!

Around 10:50, when everyone thought the show was winding down, she said out of the blue, "By the way, it will still go on after 11:00." Everyone got super excited, and it made the whole experience even more enjoyable!

After the show, there was a premiere titled "Big Announcement" on their YouTube channel at 11:30 pm. Obviously, I went check it out right away. The announcement was that they’re releasing a new mini-album this October! I was so excited I couldn’t sleep that night.
By the way, have you ever been to any music live concert?


この前、YouTube Music Weekend という音楽ライブで、ずっと真夜中でいいのにのライブがありました。
他のアーティストが15分、長くても30分くらいのビデオをプレミア公開していたから、まあ30分くらいで終わると思っていたんですけど、なんと結局11時半まであったんですよ!

最初の30分はYouTubeのフル画面でライブ映像に集中してたんですけど、さっき言った通りぼくは三十分で終わると思ってたから、これいつ終わるんだろうと思ってチャット欄を開いたんです。そしたら、ずとまよ本人がコメント欄に現れてチャットの人たちと一緒に盛り上がったり、そのライブの時のプチ情報とかを発信してたんです。その一体感がめちゃくちゃ新鮮で楽しかったです!
あと、10時50分くらいに、みんなが「そろそろ終わりかなあ」っていう雰囲気だったところに本人がチャットで、「ちなみに11時過ぎても終わらないよ!」って言って、みんなが大盛り上がりしてるのがめちゃくちゃ楽しかったです!
そしてライブが終わって、11時半から本人のyoutubeチャンネルで「重大発表」というタイトルのプレミア公開動画があって、もちろんそのままその動画に飛んだんです。そしたら、それは今度の10月に新しいミニアルバムが出るっていう発表で、めちゃくちゃテンションが上がりました!その夜は興奮してなかなか寝付けなかったなぁ。

ちなみに音楽のライブって今まで行ったことありますか?

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talking about what happened the other day (casually)

The other day, there was a music event called "YouTube Music Weekend," and my favorite band, ずっと真夜中でいいのに (Zutomayo), performed.

I initially thought it would be a short show—maybe 15 to 30 minutes—since that's how long the other artists' videos were.

But to my surprise, it went on until 11:30!

I was thrilled.

At first, I was fully immersed, watching in full screen for the first 30 minutes.

But after that, since I expected it to end soon, I started to get curious and opened the chat.

Suddenly, Zutomayo herself appeared, interacting with the audience, sharing fun facts about the live performance.

It was such a fun experience!

Around 10:50, when everyone thought the show was winding down, she said out of the blue, "By the way, it will still go on after 11:00."

Everyone got super excited, and it made the whole experience even more enjoyable!

After the show, there was a premiere titled "Big Announcement" on their YouTube channel at 11:30 pm.

Obviously, I went check it out right away.

The announcement was that they’re releasing a new mini-album this October!

I was so excited I couldn’t sleep that night.

By the way, have you ever been to any music live concert?

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The thrill of watching your favourite artist with other fans is unparalleled! I've seen my favourite band 8 times and always really enjoyed meeting the other fans who were waiting in line.

talking about what happened the other day (casually)

Titles are usually capitalized, but it's casual so I didn't correct.

The other day, there was a music event called "YouTube Music Weekend," and my favorite band, ずっと真夜中でいいのに (Zutomayo), performed.

I initially thought it would be a short show—maybe 15 to 30 minutes—since that's how long the other artists' videos were.

But to my surprise, it went on until 11:30!

I was thrilled.

At first, I was fully immersed, watching in full screen for the first 30 minutes.

But after that, since I expected it to end soon, I started to get curious and opened the chat.

Suddenly, Zutomayo herself appeared, interacting with the audience, and sharing fun facts about the live performance.

It was such a fun experience!

Around 10:50, when everyone thought the show was winding down, she said out of the blue, "By the way, it will still go on after 11:00."

Everyone got super excited, and it made the whole experience even more enjoyable!

After the show, there was a premiere titled "Big Announcement" on their YouTube channel at 11:30 pm.

Obviously, I went to check it out right away.

The announcement was that they’re releasing a new mini-album this October!

I was so excited I couldn’t sleep that night.

By the way, have you ever been to any live music live concerts?

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Your writing is great!

I haven't been to any live music concerts in person, but I have watched a Youtube Music Weekend where Vaundy performed.

What is your favorite ずっと真夜中でいいのに song?

tTalking about what happened the other day (casually)

The other day, there was a music event called "YouTube Music Weekend," and my favorite band, ずっと真夜中でいいのに (Zutomayo), performed.

I initially thought it would be a short show—maybe 15 to 30 minutes—since that's how long the other artists' videos were.

But to my surprise, it went on until 11:30!

I was thrilled.

At first, I was fully immersed, watching it in full screen for the first 30 minutes.

But after that, since I expected it to end soon, I started to getbecame curious and opened the chat.

Suddenly, Zutomayo herself appeared, interacting with the audience, sharing fun facts about the live performance.

It was such a fun experience!

Around 10:50, when everyone thought the show was winding down, she said out of the blue, "By the way, it will still go on after 11:00."

Everyone got super excited, and it made the whole experience even more enjoyable!

After the show, there was a premiere titled "Big Announcement" on their YouTube channel at 11:30 pm.

Obviously, I went to check it out right away.

"Of course, I went to check it out right away" is also OK

The announcement was that they’re releasing a new mini-album this October!

I was so excited I couldn’t sleep that night.

By the way, have you ever been to any music live concert?

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Excellent! Besides extremely minor mistakes, it is well-written with great mastery of punctuation as well! I'm glad you enjoyed the performance and hope that you're able to buy the mini-album when it goes on sale. I've been to two Hatsune Miku concerts here in America and they were exciting.

I was so excited I couldn’t sleep that night.


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I initially thought it would be a short show—maybe 15 to 30 minutes—since that's how long the other artists' videos were.


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But to my surprise, it went on until 11:30!


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I was thrilled.


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At first, I was fully immersed, watching in full screen for the first 30 minutes.


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But after that, since I expected it to end soon, I started to get curious and opened the chat.


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But after that, since I expected it to end soon, I started to getbecame curious and opened the chat.

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Suddenly, Zutomayo herself appeared, interacting with the audience, sharing fun facts about the live performance.


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Suddenly, Zutomayo herself appeared, interacting with the audience, and sharing fun facts about the live performance.

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It was such a fun experience!


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Around 10:50, when everyone thought the show was winding down, she said out of the blue, "By the way, it will still go on after 11:00."


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Everyone got super excited, and it made the whole experience even more enjoyable!


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After the show, there was a premiere titled "Big Announcement" on their YouTube channel at 11:30 pm.


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Obviously, I went check it out right away.


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The announcement was that they’re releasing a new mini-album this October!


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