SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402
Talking About My Mottos

Every morning just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.

First half sentences are about peace of my mind, and Last half sentences are for my promotion.

Here are the sentences.

- Think about happy things
- Don't gossip
- There's no such thing as an unprovoked encounter in the world.
- Everything depends on your way of thinking.
- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough
- Glaciers moving three meters do not happen overnight.
- There is an uncomfortable but interesting change in the border.
- Why be normal, Better but less
- Trust yourself

When I am done writing them, I become calm and have courage to live a better life.

Corrections

Talking About My Mottos

Every morning just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.

FThe first half are sentences are about peace of my mind, and Lthe last half sentences are for my promotionconfidence.

Here are the sentences.

- Think about happy things

- Don't gossip

- There's no such thing as an unprovoked encounter in the world.

- Everything depends on your way of thinking.

- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough

- Glaciers moving three meters do not happen overnight.

- Trust yourself

When I am done writing them, I become calm and have courage to live a better life.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you!

6

First half sentences are about peace of my mind, and Lthe last half sentences are for my impromotionvement.

"Improvement" , "development" may express better the intended meaning.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Talking About My Mottos

Every morning jusRight after waking up each morning, I write down my nine mottos.

I rephrased the first part to flow a little better.
Also, "Right after waking up," means essentially the same thing as "just after waking up."

FThe first half of the sentences I write are about peace of my mind, and Last halfthe second half of the sentences are for my promotion.

I'm not sure what you mean by "my promotion" here. "Promotion" in English generally means "advancement in a job or career" or "advancement in a phase of life." Is this what you mean here?

Here are the sentences.:

- Think about happy things.

Just added a period (.) to this sentence and some of the others below.

- Don't gossip.

- There's no such thing as an unprovoked encounter in the world.

- Everything depends on your way of thinking.

- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough.

- Glaciers moving three meters do not happen overnight.

- There is an uncomfortable but interesting change in the border.

- Why be normal, Bbetter but less.

- Trust yourself.

When I am donefinish writing them, I become calm and havse mottos, I can be calm and focused and have the courage to live a better life.

Feedback

잘 했습니다!

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

너무 고맙습니다!

Talking About My Mottos

Every morning, just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.

FThe first halffew sentences are about my peace of my mind, and Lthe last half sentences are for my promotion.

Here are the sentences.

- Think about happy things

- Don't gossip

- There's no such thing as an unprovoked encounter in the world.

- Everything depends on your way of thinking.

- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough

- Glaciers moving three meters does not happen overnight.

- There is an uncomfortable but interesting change in the border.

- Why be normal, Bbetter but less

- Trust yourself

When I am done writing them, I become calm and have courage to live a better life.

Feedback

Good writing :)

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you!

Every morning, just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.

FThe first halffew sentences are about peace of my mind, and Last halfthe last few sentences are for my promotion.

Here are the sentences.;

When I am done writing them, I become calm and have the courage to live a better life.

Feedback

good

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Feb. 24, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Talking About My Mottos


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every morning just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.


Every morning, just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.

Every morning, just after waking up, I write down my nine mottos.

Every morning jusRight after waking up each morning, I write down my nine mottos.

I rephrased the first part to flow a little better. Also, "Right after waking up," means essentially the same thing as "just after waking up."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First half sentences are about peace of my mind, and Last half sentences are for my promotion.


FThe first halffew sentences are about peace of my mind, and Last halfthe last few sentences are for my promotion.

FThe first halffew sentences are about my peace of my mind, and Lthe last half sentences are for my promotion.

FThe first half of the sentences I write are about peace of my mind, and Last halfthe second half of the sentences are for my promotion.

I'm not sure what you mean by "my promotion" here. "Promotion" in English generally means "advancement in a job or career" or "advancement in a phase of life." Is this what you mean here?

First half sentences are about peace of my mind, and Lthe last half sentences are for my impromotionvement.

"Improvement" , "development" may express better the intended meaning.

FThe first half are sentences are about peace of my mind, and Lthe last half sentences are for my promotionconfidence.

Here are the sentences.


Here are the sentences.;

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Here are the sentences.:

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Think about happy things


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Think about happy things.

Just added a period (.) to this sentence and some of the others below.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Don't gossip


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Don't gossip.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- There's no such thing as an unprovoked encounter in the world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Everything depends on your way of thinking.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Glaciers moving three meters do not happen overnight.


- Glaciers moving three meters does not happen overnight.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- There is an uncomfortable but interesting change in the border.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Why be normal, Better but less


- Why be normal, Bbetter but less

- Why be normal, Bbetter but less.

- Trust yourself


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

- Trust yourself.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I am done writing them, I become calm and have courage to live a better life.


When I am done writing them, I become calm and have the courage to live a better life.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I am donefinish writing them, I become calm and havse mottos, I can be calm and focused and have the courage to live a better life.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium