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Learn to capitalised on the possesive 'I'. Try to seperate your sentences. You should use the word in rather on in this sentence here.

I can say manyhave a lot of good things to mention about my country .

First of all , the gastronomy.

This is very very good!

It´ is true that we have one of the best gastronomy on allin the world , we are the best country on this sector , and. It is not only for the dishes , also is for our chefs .but the chefs as well.

Shorten sentence. Start with It is true. Since you have mentioned that Spain has one of the best gastronomy in the world, there is no need to over repeat it in the next one.

We have a huge list of big chef that theywhom haves been a winner from a huge fama on abroad .But get back to the dishes . Similarly, we have another huge list of them different dishes, for example : P; paella , gazpacho o calamares fritos .

But However, we aren´t knew about not widely known for our meals .

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Spelling corrections for example; Abroad and typical.

We are richers in culture , wOur culture is rich and diverse. We have are huge variaety of anciesnt monument as ejemple :s such as La Alhambra ,and o Gaudi ´s building .

Spelling error and also using plurals instead of singular.

On the other hand , our language is very popular outside of our frontere , hborders. However , it is one of the most harddifficult languages to learn , since , we have a difficultcomplex gramma , br. But with this , iI don´’t wmeant to say yo that you will never are going to learn my language , w. With effort and dedicateion, you will be able to speak it .!

“Frontere” should be “borders” in English. "With effort and dedicate", this should be “with effort and dedication.” Try to avoid commas before conjunctions like “but” and “since.”

To finish , iI invite you to visit my country , i. I don´’t want to levelower your expectation s, but Spain is the best place to spend your holidays with both your friends and your family , as w. We have all kinds of places forto madke any plan , i. If you want to go to party , you can go to Ibiza , Mallorca, or Marbella .

Nice closing! Use “with both your friends and your family” instead of “both your friends and your family” for better flow. Don’t forget to add commas between city names: “Ibiza, Mallorca, or Marbella.”

If you want to dgo sightseeing , you can visit our several of our monuments like for example ,, such as the Alhambra , the gGolden tTower, or one of the many castles .

Capitalize proper names like “Golden Tower.” “Do sightseeing”, it's more natural to say “go sightseeing.”

On the other hand , if you want to dgo on a sports trip , you can do the Santiago road´s or relativCamino de Santiago or similar routes .

Good job describing different types of travel. Just a few notes, instead of “or relatives,” say “or similar routes.” “Relatives” refers to family members, not similar things. “Santiago road´s”, the correct term is “Camino de Santiago”

I hope that you liked this small introduction abouto my country .

I could spend hours talking about my born irthplace ,. Thank you so much for help me ,I feel soing me. I am truly gratieful for this moment thate time you dedicated on my to me.

Thank you so much for help me”, should be “for helping me. “Dedicated on my” should be “dedicated to me.”

Well , to start , iI want to say you that iI am from Spain , for my one of the best countries oin the world , in special for me. Specifically, iI am from Almería , which is located oin the south of Spain .

You don't have to put space before and also after commas. "On" refers to the surface (for example - The book is on the table.), whereas "in" because we consider the world as a place we exist in, rather thhan something we are physically on top of.
"in the south" because south refers to a region and you are talking about Almeria which is located inside this region.

It´s true that we have one of the best gastronomy on allies in the world , w. We are the best country oin this sector , and it is not only forbecause of the dishes ,but also is forbecause of our chefs .

"gastronomies" because you are reffering to one of many great food cultures

We have a huge list of biggreat chef that they have been winner a huge fama onwho have gained widespread fame abroad . But getting back to the dishes , we have another hugelong list of them , for example : Ppaella , gazpacho or calamares fritos .

But , we aren´ not knew aboutown only because of our meals .

This is a passive voice - it is used when the subject of the sentence is the receiver of the action. In this example "we" is the subject, they are not doing the action, instead the action is happening to "us".

Our culture is very popular on aborad , abroad, like, for instance the, flamenco , the most tiypical dance in my country , or our Easter week in the Andalusiea community , located oin the south of Spain .

We are richers in culture , we have are,with a huge variaety of anciesnt monument as ejemple s, such as: La Alhambra , or Gaudi ´'s building s.

On the other hand , our language is very popular outside of our frontere , hborders. However , it is one of the most hardest languages to learn , since , we have a difficult gramma , br. But with this , iI don´'t wmeant to say yo that you will never are goingbe able to learn my language , w. With effort and dedicateion you will be able to speak it .

To finish , iI invite you to visit my country , i. I don´'t want to levelower your expectation , but Spain is the best place to spend your holidays bo, whether with your friends andor your family , as we have all kind of places for made any plan , iany kind of plan. If you want to go to party , you can go to Ibiza , Mallorca or Marbella .

If you want to do sightseeing , you can visit our several of our monuments like, for example , the Alhambra , the gGolden tTower or, one of the many castles .

On the other hand , if you want to do a sports trip , you can do the Santiago road´s or relativCamino or other routes .

I hope that you liked this smallbrief introduction abouto my country .

I could spend hours talking about my born irthplace ,. Thank you so much for helping me , I feel so gratieful for this moment that you dedicated on my to me.