I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

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I want to speak like a native speaker!!

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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

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I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.✍️

B: It's been so hot lately, huh?

A: Yeah, I can really feel the effects of global warming.

The other day on the news, Greenland had several days of unusually high temperatures, and the rapidly melting ice was pouring into the ocean.

The temperature there's also said to be about 5 degrees higher than normal.

And from the 15th to the 17th, more than 6 billion tons of ice melted per day.

Isn't that crazy, 6 billion tons?

According to them, that's enough to fill the Olympic swimming pool 7.2 million times.

In one day!

If all the ice in Greenland were to melt, the world's sea level would rise about 7.5 meters.

B: I wonder how much of the ice has melted.

B: I thought it was only 1.5 mm, but that's 1.5 mm in about 3 months.

I wonder what the future holds, huh?

A: True.

However, as temperatures steadily rise due to global warming, snow and ice'll naturally melt more easily.

As the snow and ice melt, the dark-colored ground and oceans are exposed, dramatically increasing the absorption of solar energy.

As a result, global warming'll further accelerate.

This is why the high latitudes of the Northern Hemisphere are the most vulnerable to changes caused by climate change.

Even Japan is feeling the effects of climate change in the form of an increase in extremely hot days, right?

But these northern hemisphere high latitudes, such as Greenland, are more affected by global warming.

B: It's been so hot lately, huh?

A: Yeah, I can really feel the effects of global warming.

The temperature there's also said to be about 5 degrees higher than normal.

And from the 15th to the 17th, more than 6 billion tons of ice melted per day.

In one day!

If all the ice in Greenland were to melt, the world's sea level would rise about 7.5 meters.

B: I wonder how much of the ice has melted.

A: I don't know, but from spring to July this year, the temperature rose unexpectedly and almost the entire surface of the ice sheet melted, raising the global sea level by 1.5 mm.

B: I thought it was only 1.5 mm, but that's 1.5 mm in about 3 months.

I wonder what the future holds, huh?

A: True.

Snow and ice effectively reflect sunlight, making it difficult for the ground and oceans to receive solar energy.

However, as temperatures steadily rise due to global warming, snow and ice'll naturally melt more easily.

As the snow and ice melt, the dark-colored ground and oceans are exposed, dramatically increasing the absorption of solar energy.

As a result, global warming'll further accelerate.

This is why the high latitudes of the Northern Hemisphere are the most vulnerable to changes caused by climate change.

Even Japan is feeling the effects of climate change in the form of an increase in extremely hot days, right?

But these northern hemisphere high latitudes, such as Greenland, are more affected by global warming.