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sho

July 28, 2022

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Talking about Foods 15

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



B: What did you eat tonight?
A: Ebichili.
B: What's that?
A: Fried shrimp with chili sauce.
B: Nice! Sounds delicious!
A: Yeah, it's awesome! This kind of spicy food goes well with rice! The one I had isn't as spicy though. Do you like spicy food?

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Talking about Foods 15

"Food" can also be the plural form of "food."

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

or

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What did you eat tonighthave for dinner?

This is okay, too.

B: What did you eat for dinner?

A: Ebichili.

B: What's that?

A: Fried shrimp with chili sauce.

B: Nice!

Sounds delicious!

A: Yeah, it's awesome!

This kind of spicy food goes well with rice!

The one I had isn't aso spicy though.

This is okay, too.

Do you like spicy food?

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sho

July 31, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š

I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What did you eat tonighthis evening?

Sounds deliciousThat sounds really good!

Totally stylistic feedback, but I'd probably never say "Sounds delicious" by itself.

The one I had iwasn't asvery spicy, though.

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Well done :-)

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jbiesnecker

July 29, 2022

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It very much is. :-) https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/all-right-or-alright-which-is-correct

Plus, if you're trying to write speech, it's much more natural than "all right" that almost nobody would enunciate.

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sho

July 29, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talking about Foods 15

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: What did you eat tonighthis evening?

A: Ebichili.

B: What's that?

A: Fried shrimp with chili sauce.

B: Nice!

Sounds delicious!

A: Yeah, it's awesome!

ThisIt's the kind of spicy food that goes well with rice!

The one I had iwasn't as spicy though.

Needs to be in past tense: Was not -> wasn't.

Do you like spicy food?

Feedback

Great writing! I just looked at pictures of Ebichili and it looks so nice! I will have to try some :)

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sho

July 29, 2022

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Ohhh, try it!!!๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜
Anyway, thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

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It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!

Contrary to popular belief, "alright" is not a word.

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Very good!

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sho

July 29, 2022

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Thank you!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

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jbiesnecker

July 29, 2022

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It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!

It very much is. :-) https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/all-right-or-alright-which-is-correct

Plus, if you're trying to write speech, it's much more natural than "all right" that almost nobody would enunciate.

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Talking about Foods 15

"Food" can also be the plural form of "food."

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native speaker!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!

Contrary to popular belief, "alright" is not a word.

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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to receive your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

I'm looking forward to receiveing your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

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B: What did you eat tonight?


B: What did you eat tonighthis evening?

B: What did you eat tonighthis evening?

B: What did you eat tonighthave for dinner?

This is okay, too. B: What did you eat for dinner?

A: Ebichili.


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B: What's that?


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A: Fried shrimp with chili sauce.


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B: Nice!


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Sounds delicious!


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Sounds deliciousThat sounds really good!

Totally stylistic feedback, but I'd probably never say "Sounds delicious" by itself.

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A: Yeah, it's awesome!


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This kind of spicy food goes well with rice!


ThisIt's the kind of spicy food that goes well with rice!

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The one I had isn't as spicy though.


The one I had iwasn't as spicy though.

Needs to be in past tense: Was not -> wasn't.

The one I had iwasn't asvery spicy, though.

The one I had isn't aso spicy though.

This is okay, too.

Do you like spicy food?


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