July 29, 2022
Talking about a movie
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Have you seen "Robotoo-chan"?
B: What's that?
A: Crayon Shin-chan: Intense Battle! Robo Dad Strikes Back.
B: No, I haven't. what's it about?
A: Let's see... One day, hiroshi goes to a massage parlor, and his body is changed into a robot and he tries to get his real body back.
B: Hiroshi is the main character this time?
A: Well, it's like Shin-chan and Hiroshi are both main characters.
B: I see. I'll watch it!
-A week later
B: I watched "Roboto-chan".
It was good!
A: Great!
What's your score?
B: Seven.
A: That low? What part didn't you like?
B: No. It's not low. And I don't not like it. It wasn't bad and I was moved, but the comedy didn't click with me.
A: I see. I guess there're scenes you'd have to watch Japanese TV to understand it.
B: Probably.
What's your score?
A: 8 points
B: So it's not that different from mine. lol!
But why that score?
A: It had good animation. A famous director did part of the storyboard.
B: I see. what's their name?
A: Masaaki Yuasa
B: Are any of his movies are famous?
A: Lots. I think the most famous is, "The Night is Short, Walk on Girl".
His movies have unique worldviews and animations, so people tend to either love or hate them, but I think you should watch at least one.
B: I'll watch one!
A: Anyways, the best part of "Robo-To-chan" is the last scene!
B: I was moved by that scene too.
A: That scene was a tear jerker, yeah?
Everyone who saw it must have cried, right?
B: Absolutely! The way he intentionally lost made me cry.
A: I see... Me think that Hiroshi realizing he didn't belong there made him lose his strength
B: I see.
By the was, I couldn't understand when or why the father's and the mother's sides got along well.
A: Yeah, I feel you. I couldn't understand too. But it happens in this series. That's why this is Shin-chan movies, so don't think about it too deeply.
B: But what about "Adult" and "Sengoku"?
A: Those're an exception.
Talking about a mMovie
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's all right if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
I'd also like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to receiving your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Have you seen "Robotoo-chan"?
B: What's that?
A: Crayon Shin-chan: Intense Battle!
Robo Dad Strikes Back.
B: No, I haven't.
wWhat's it about?
A: Let's see... One day, hHiroshi goes to a massage parlor, and his body is changed into a robot and then he tries to get his real body back.
B: Hiroshi is the main character this timof the movie?
A: Well, it's like Shin-chan and Hiroshi are both main characters.
B: I see.
I'll watch it!
- A week later
B: I watched "_Roboto-chan"_.
Just making sure that you know we underline titles of movies.
It was good!
A: Great!
What's your score where 10 is the best?
A: That low?
What part didn't you like?
B: No.
It's not low.
And I don't not like it.
It wasn't bad and I was moved, but the comedy didn't click with me.
A: I see.
I guess there're scenes where you'd have to watch Japanese TV to understand it.
Nice use of contractions!
B: Probably.
What's your score?
A: 8 points
B: So it's not that different from mine.
lol!
But why that score?
A: It had good animation.
A famous director did part of the storyboard.
B: I see.
wWhat's their name?
or
Who was it?
A: Masaaki Yuasa.
B: Are any of his movies are famous?
A: Lots.
I think the most famous is, "_The Night is Short, Walk on Girl"_.
His movies have unique worldviews and animations, so people tend to either love them or hate them, but I think you should watch at least one to see for yourself.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: I'll watch one!
A: Anyways, the best part of "_Robo-To-chan"_ is the last scene!
B: I was moved by that scene too.
A: That scene was a tear jerker, yeah?
Everyone who saw's seen it must have cried, right?
B: Absolutely!
The way he intentionally lost made me cry.
A: I see... MeI think that Hiroshi realizing he didn't belong there made him lose his strength
B: I see.
By the wasy, I couldn't understand when or why the father's and the mother's sides got along well.
A: Yeah, I feel you.
I couldn't understand tooit either.
But it happens in this series.
That's why this isese are Shin-chan movies, so don't think about it too deeply.
B: But what about "_Adult"_ and "_Sengoku"_?
A: Those're an are exceptions.
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Have you seen "Robotoo-chan"? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: What's that? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Crayon Shin-chan: Intense Battle! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Robo Dad Strikes Back. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Well, it's like Shin-chan and Hiroshi are both main characters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I watched "Roboto-chan". B: I watched Just making sure that you know we underline titles of movies. |
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It was good! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Great! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: That low? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It wasn't bad and I was moved, but the comedy didn't click with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I guess there're scenes you'd have to watch Japanese TV to understand it. I guess there're scenes where you'd have to watch Japanese TV to understand it. Nice use of contractions! |
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What's your score? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: 8 points This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: So it's not that different from mine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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lol! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But why that score? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: It had good animation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A famous director did part of the storyboard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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what's their name?
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B: Are any of his movies are famous? B: Are |
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A: Lots. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think the most famous is, "The Night is Short, Walk on Girl". I think the most famous is, |
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His movies have unique worldviews and animations, so people tend to either love or hate them, but I think you should watch at least one. His movies have unique worldviews and animations, so people tend to either love them or hate them, but I think you should watch at least one to see for yourself. This sounds more natural in the US. |
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B: I'll watch one! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Anyways, the best part of "Robo-To-chan" is the last scene! A: Anyway |
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B: I was moved by that scene too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: That scene was a tear jerker, yeah? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Everyone who saw it must have cried, right? Everyone who |
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B: Absolutely! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The way he intentionally lost made me cry. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: I see... Me think that Hiroshi realizing he didn't belong there made him lose his strength A: I see... |
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B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I couldn't understand too. I couldn't understand |
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But it happens in this series. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's why this is Shin-chan movies, so don't think about it too deeply. Th |
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B: But what about "Adult" and "Sengoku"? B: But what about |
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A: Those're an exception. A: Those |
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