Oct. 13, 2020
Talk to the pro.
Few weeks ago, have an argument with my best friend.
He wants to immigrate to UK.
As a friend I will always support his decision.
But after I ask him few more questions about his planning.
I was sock by how poor his plan.
So, I told him he should talk to immigration consultant.
He reacted annoyingly because he said most consultants are not reliable.
Actually, I do agree that.
But to be fair I don’t all immigration consultant will be that worst.
To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants.
At the end, maybe I will move to other country too.
If I can found a good immigration consultant.
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Talk to the pro. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Talk to In writing, I would not shorten professional to pro. |
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Few weeks ago, have an argument with my best friend.
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He wants to immigrate to UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK. |
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As a friend I will always support his decision. As a friend, I will always support his decisions. As a friend, I will always support his decision I'm combining this sentence with the next one. |
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But after I ask him few more questions about his planning. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how poorly he planned it.
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I was sock by how poor his plan.
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So, I told him he should talk to immigration consultant. So, I told him that he should talk to an immigration consultant. So, I told him he should talk to an immigration consultant. |
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He reacted annoyingly because he said most consultants are not reliable. He said *that* most sounds more natural. He |
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Actually, I do agree that. Actually, I agree with that.¶ A |
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But to be fair I don’t all immigration consultant will be that worst. But to be fair, I don’t think all immigration consultant
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To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants. This sentence has been marked as perfect! To prove him wrong, I |
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At the end, maybe I will move to other country too.
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If I can found a good immigration consultant.
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