Oct. 25, 2025
TALK ABOUT THE RISKIEST THING YOU’VE EVER DONE
I’m not a risk-taker really, because my parents were too protective when I was a little girl. After an accident I had when I was four, they wanted to avoid any other. I wanted to get hurt again neither, therefore until now I don’t usually take risks.
But once, I was persuaded to try zip lining. It happened during a school excursion with my children in an adventure park. From the beginning all the participants were in groups to do every activity of the park: crossing a rope bridge, a treetop tour, tree climbing and more. There was a ziplining, but I had ruled out getting on it. When it was our turn, my seven-year-old boy was the first one who wanted to try. It was a great place for beginners and finally my husband and I also went on the zip line to take advantage of the opportunity to do a risky thing.
Although it was a few seconds, the adrenaline rush hits you immediately. You may feel as if you're falling, but you're actually gliding in a controlled manner. It was such an amazing experience that I’ve never forgotten.
I’m not a real risk-taker really, because my parents were too protective when I was a little girl.
Can't really get away with really there, it's usually behind. if the clauses were switched around so it was at the end it could maybe work.
After an accident I had when I was four, they wantdecided to avoid any other.
Sounds a bit more severe than wanted, and 'another' is a word. 'any other' is emphasis but if you don't mind changing wanted it's okay without.
I didn't wanted to get hurt again neither, therefore untilp to now I don’haven't usually taken risks.
until now means you are taking risks now, it seems to not be a sudden change, so 'up to now' or even 'up to and including now' except we don't need emphasis.
But onceOne time though, I was persuaded to try zip lining.
It happened during a school excursionfieldtrip with my children in an adventure park.
'trip' is a word for excursion and 'fieldtrip' is the school's special way to call it.
From the beginning, all the participants were in groups to do every activity of the park: crossing a rope bridge, a treetop tour, tree climbing and more.
There was a ziplininge, but I had ruled out getting on it.
When it was our turn, my seven-year-old boy was the first one who wanted to try.
It was a great place for beginners, and finally soon afterwards my husband and I also went on the zip line to take advantage of the opportunity to dotry a risky thing.
Although it was aonly few seconds, the adrenaline rush hits you immediately.
I think of 'it' as 'I think', so I changed it around.
You may feel as if you're falling, but you're actually gliding in a controlled manner.
It was such an amazing experience that I’ve never forgotten.
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I went on a small playground zipline recently and intentionally went with two people to make it more scary, doing it alone is much more yes/no. I used to play challenges of copying each other jumping around the playground, so my risk calculation has more to work with in that way.
TALKING ABOUT THE RISKIEST THING YOU’I'VE EVER DONE
I’m not a risk-taker, really, because my parents were too protective when I was a little girl.
After an accident I had when I was four, they wanted to avoid any other accident.
Though it is repetitive, this construction makes it necessary to specify "accident" again.
I didn't wanted to get hurt again neither, therefore until now I don’idn't usually take risks.
Simply placing "neither" at the end does not form the negative.
But once, I was persuaded to try zip lining.
It happened during a school excursionfield trip with my children inat an adventure park.
"Field trip" is the correct translation of the Spanish "excursión".
In English, an "excursion" may refer to a short trip to a museum, beach, hiking trail, etc. with close friends.
From the beginning, all the participants were in groups to do every activity of the park: crossing a rope bridge, a treetop tour, tree climbing and more.
There was a ziplininge, but I had ruled out getting on it.
It was a great place for beginners and fin. Eventually, my husband and I also went on the zip line to take advantage of the opportunity to do a risky thing.
Although it was just a few seconds, the adrenaline rush hits you immediately.
You may feel as if you're falling, but you're actually gliding in a controlled manner.
It was such an amazing experience that I’ve never forgotten it.
The same construction is used here as in your earlier sentence, so it's necessary to be a little repetitive. You could say this...
It was an amazing experience that I've never forgotten.
...but both sound natural either way.
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TALK ABOUT THE RISKIEST THING YOU’VE EVER DONE TALKING ABOUT THE RISKIEST THING |
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After an accident I had when I was four, they wanted to avoid any other. After an accident I had when I was four, they wanted to avoid any other accident. Though it is repetitive, this construction makes it necessary to specify "accident" again. After an accident I had when I was four, they Sounds a bit more severe than wanted, and 'another' is a word. 'any other' is emphasis but if you don't mind changing wanted it's okay without. |
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I’m not a risk-taker really, because my parents were too protective when I was a little girl. I’m not a risk-taker, really, because my parents were too protective when I was a little girl. I’m not a real risk-taker Can't really get away with really there, it's usually behind. if the clauses were switched around so it was at the end it could maybe work. |
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I wanted to get hurt again neither, therefore until now I don’t usually take risks. I didn't want Simply placing "neither" at the end does not form the negative. I didn't want until now means you are taking risks now, it seems to not be a sudden change, so 'up to now' or even 'up to and including now' except we don't need emphasis. |
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But once, I was persuaded to try zip lining. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It happened during a school excursion with my children in an adventure park. It happened during a school "Field trip" is the correct translation of the Spanish "excursión". In English, an "excursion" may refer to a short trip to a museum, beach, hiking trail, etc. with close friends. It happened during a school 'trip' is a word for excursion and 'fieldtrip' is the school's special way to call it. |
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From the beginning all the participants were in groups to do every activity of the park: crossing a rope bridge, a treetop tour, tree climbing and more. From the beginning, all the participants were in groups to do every activity of the park: crossing a rope bridge, a treetop tour, tree climbing and more. From the beginning, all the participants were in groups to do every activity of the park: crossing a rope bridge, a treetop tour, tree climbing and more. |
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There was a ziplining, but I had ruled out getting on it. There was a ziplin There was a ziplin |
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When it was our turn, my seven-year-old boy was the first one who wanted to try. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a great place for beginners and finally my husband and I also went on the zip line to take advantage of the opportunity to do a risky thing. It was a great place for beginners It was a great place for beginners, and finally soon afterwards my husband and I |
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Although it was a few seconds, the adrenaline rush hits you immediately. Although it was just a few seconds, the adrenaline rush hits you immediately. Although I think of 'it' as 'I think', so I changed it around. |
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You may feel as if you're falling, but you're actually gliding in a controlled manner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was such an amazing experience that I’ve never forgotten. It was such an amazing experience that I’ve never forgotten it. The same construction is used here as in your earlier sentence, so it's necessary to be a little repetitive. You could say this... It was an amazing experience that I've never forgotten. ...but both sound natural either way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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